Comments | lostcityfound: FIC: The Stars Look Very Different Today - PG-13

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FIC: The Stars Look Very Different Today - PG-13 - John, Rodney

Jun 22, 2007 23:49

Title: The Stars Look Very Different Today
Author: Icarus
Website: Icarus.Slash.Fiction
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Character death
Summary: This time, John followed orders and did the search and rescue later. "Oh, really? How's that working out for you?"
A/N: Yes, the title's a nod to David Bowie's "Space Oddity."

( John felt empty and helpless without Ancient controls. )

angst, icarus

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icarusancalion June 29 2007, 02:33:21 UTC

Thank you. Yes, John hasn't processed what's happened yet even though he knows exactly what it means. He'll probably get solidly drunk when he returns to Atlantis, too.

Icarus

melodyunity June 24 2007, 03:34:53 UTC

Okay, ouch. That last line? Like a knife through the heart.

icarusancalion June 29 2007, 02:45:18 UTC

Cool. You pretty well describe what John is feeling right now, too.

liresius June 24 2007, 05:54:23 UTC

Ouch! Poignant. Powerful. Well done.

icarusancalion June 29 2007, 03:05:03 UTC

Thank you. As for the ouch, ah, I have a bandaid if you need it.

unaccompanied_g May 16 2008, 07:16:36 UTC

D: This was lovely, but so sad.