In Vino Veritas

Aug 12, 2007 18:33

I come bearing more fic! This is for three people: teh_kittykat who suggested I write this in the first place, katimus_prime who I somehow managed to get into this pairing, and ryshili who tracked me down through e-mail and pretty much asked me to write more fic. Also, this was going to be a PWP, but... well... the plot bunny was rather insistent on there being plot. That said ( Read more... )

fandom, phoenix wright, fanfiction

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teh_kittykat August 12 2007, 22:59:26 UTC
You has a hotness. :D

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pyrasaur August 12 2007, 23:38:52 UTC
Ah, I love the dynamic between these two, all the banter and button-pushing and rivalry. And the mental image of Franziska kicking Greg's shins is great. XD A wonderful AUverse all around.

(If I may make a suggestion, though, I don't think motivating factors like the sleep deprivation and alcohol need so many mentions -- I could keep track of it just fine. Unless the mentions were meant as Gregory trying to justify it to himself repeatedly?)

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lostangelssong August 13 2007, 00:48:28 UTC
I think that part of the mentions of the motivating factors was in fact Gregory trying to rationalize it to himself.

And I'm glad you like it. ^_^

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elly_marion August 13 2007, 01:50:23 UTC
I was laughing at some of this story. Very very well done :)

I may have to favorite this one too.

Priceless at Franziska calling, and how he "has to fix" Manfred. Also priceless at calling her "Fran" and at the end :)

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lostangelssong August 13 2007, 03:00:16 UTC
I don't mind if you favorite it! ^_^ I'm glad that you liked it.

And I think that young!Fran is probably one of my favorite things in the fic, because she's just so adorable.

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iczer6 August 13 2007, 02:44:11 UTC
I love 'kid' Franziska so very, very much.

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lostangelssong August 13 2007, 03:00:36 UTC
Thank you! She's very fun to write. ^_^

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frostedinferno August 13 2007, 05:25:14 UTC
Ohmygodomghagsdfsdhadgsahffffffrrrrnnnnfnmgk.

I have been waiting for this fic MY ENTIRE LIFE SINCE I STARTED PLAYING PW). AND THUS I LOVE YOU VERY MUCH. PLEASE write more PLEASEpleasepleasepleaseplease?! (I kept typing pleasure there by accident...) ♥♥♥♥♥

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lostangelssong August 13 2007, 15:56:15 UTC
I'm glad you liked the fic! ^^;; I like to be able to give someone one of their life's desires. :D

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