For the bugs_n_slime ficathon

[lostakasha]

Angie at Dawn (Just Like Nicky Hopkins)
by lostakasha
Jack/Angela
PG-13
Not mine.
Beta by sweptawaybayou.
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Don't get the title reference? Google is your friend.

Prompt: The people with money and guns will do what they want and everyone else will pay until the whole world blows up or burns out or whatever. - Anne Fleming (The

Comments

[a_mistletoe]

This is so good I didn't understand most of it. BUT that is its strength because I know I understand the concept behind it. This encapsulates Jack and Angela; gives a reason for his suddenly calling her 'Angie'; allows a torch to shine inside the Hodgins' manor and just nails what proper writing is all about.

I already knew you were talented but not THIS, no, not this.

So the muse wandered off huh? It has certainly been re-invigorated on vacation.

[lostakasha]

You are too kind -- thank you for such wonderful feedback. And you are *so* funny. Thank you, thank you. ♥

[a_mistletoe]

I like to consider myself wry, but people prefer funny. I'm glad my jolly side comes across in tryped words as well as in my verbal witticisms, which keep my friends amused in all situations.

Crappy day so I replied to cheer myself up. You can tell I'm blergh as there is not an ounce of humour in this except for Booth trying to poke his eye out.

[makd]

Wonderful.

Great insights into both characters, and characters' voices are spot on.

Love how, with all that space, Hodgins lives in just a few rooms. Love how they love.

[lostakasha]

Thanks, M! It's funny -- I don't really miss the show that much, but boy, do I miss the characters. It was fun to dig deep for this one.

[lostakasha]

we hardly ever see anything below the surface images with her ... sadly, because she's so rich, as is Jack. But I really mourn the loss of time they devote to Zach -- I read`an interview with one of the writers recently that said they've just run out of space because of developing the couples' realtionships. That's a shame, and one we can look to inspired fanfic to correct!!

Thanks for the terrific feedback, sweets. I'm hoping there's more to come, but one never knows.

[lostakasha]

A Bones watch sounds terrific! I'll let you take the lead on episode choice... :D

[4ensicbones]

Ahhh, loved it! I'm at a loss for words. Totally fits into what I think would have happened after the scene ended.

[lostakasha]

*dances madly*

Yay! I'm delighted that this worked for you. Thanks so much!

[jainanicole]

Beautiful! ♥