Enjoying the moment of settled calm
(As Claire conveyed to Terra what had happened at the inlet early this morning, Malana could hear soft giggles from both as she opened her journal to write in it using the light provided by the flames of the fire they sat around. Rose with them this evening, saying little as she seemed more the listener, then talker the past couple of days
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I really love this line:
"The only ones who seemed to gather at the same fire each night are Jack, Kate, Sayid and Charlie, I think most here are starting to look at them as the leadership"
It was the perfect way to set up the main characters within the limits of someone that would be on the island with them. And they mostly *are* the leaders. Although I would feel bad for anyone that relied on Charlie to lead them if they were in trouble!
Great job with this. I hope you write more soon.
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