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lost_spook

Fic: Last Missing Scene

Nov 24, 2009 16:33

After going from one extreme to another (1 being: "I don't think I can straighten this one into anything I can actually post!" and 2: "Hey, what if I added in an extra Missing Scene where..." *rolls eyes*), here's the last Missing Scene from Lonely House ( Read more... )

fannish scribbles, tilly holmes, nat webber, colonel crichton, unit, doctor who, 1980s unit

Comments 7

jjpor November 24 2009, 20:25:49 UTC

Heheh - more lovely fluffy fluff (and I mean that as a compliment!) Tilly has arms??!! And the Colonel remains as ever calm and cool in a crisis. And Nat and Kennedy in the pub was very nice as well. It's not _really_ the last one - is it?? :D

lost_spook November 24 2009, 21:34:01 UTC

Really? Are you sure? Cos I thought you didn't read that sort of stuff, oh no. ;-D

Thanks!

*hands over ears singing loudly* Stop it, because I could write stuff like this till it comes out of my ears. (Which would be disturbing now I come to think about it.)

It's not the last you've seen of 1980s UNIT, admittedly, not quite yet.

And Kennedy and Nat? This is their eternal disagreement that if they meet in 20 years time they'll still be arguing over it if either of them bring it up. Because there's always something really stupid like that...

persiflage_1 November 24 2009, 20:53:48 UTC

What’s more, the end result was not meant to be him saying: “Tilly, you’ve got arms.”

Teehee! Mind you, I can empathise with Tilly's annoyance - I always get "You've got legs" if I wear a skirt!

Couple of typos:

She frowned in concentration he helped her sit on the small wall by the flowerbeds.

Needs an "as" before "he"

Kennedy eyebrow’s twisted warily.

Why've Kennedy's eyebrows got an apostrophe?

lost_spook November 24 2009, 21:28:14 UTC

Yes, me too. How witty that is. *rolls eyes*

And, thank you - fixed! And, of course, Kennedy has special eyebrows that need an apostrophe. Obviously. :lol:

persiflage_1 November 25 2009, 05:36:01 UTC

Not in the least witty!!

And, thank you - fixed! And, of course, Kennedy has special eyebrows that need an apostrophe. Obviously. :lol:

Oh, obviously!

primsong November 24 2009, 22:07:36 UTC

Tilly has arms! X-D Oh Nat, such a smoothie.

I love her sliding off the wall as well, describes both the action and what she's feeling like at the same time.

Great fluff-and-dagger stuff here.

lost_spook November 25 2009, 17:06:56 UTC

Heh, thanks for reading. (To be fair to Nat, he was trying to be unromantic, so fair enough, really. ;-D)

And, yay, thanks. :-)