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Fic: Chance Encounter (DW)

Sep 23, 2013 12:53

Title: Chance Encounter
Author: lost_spook
Rating: All ages/PG
Word Count: 2859
Characters/Pairings: Nat Webber, Tilly Holmes, Brigadier Winifred Bambera, Ancelyn (Nat/Tilly, Bambera/Ancelyn)
Notes/Warnings: A coda of sorts for 1980s UNIT. 1997
Summary: Why is it, when UNIT is involved, lunch always means something trying to eat you rather than the other ( Read more... )

trope_bingo, nat webber, unit, doctor who, ancelyn, 1980s unit, 500 prompts, fannish scribbles, bambera, tilly holmes

Comments 5

persiflage_1 September 23 2013, 13:38:18 UTC

Oh dear! Poor Nat and Tilly...

This made me laugh:

"Good," she said. Then she looked him over. "You've got blood on that shirt, and it was clean on today."

"Well, I'll try to bleed more carefully next time," said Nat, and closed his eyes again.

Couple of edits needed:

"That she didn't airily suggest I bring my wife or significant other without the realising the dreadful truth?"

no "the" before "realising"

Nat started back at her in surprise,

"stared" not "started"

lost_spook September 23 2013, 18:48:03 UTC

Thanks! (And I@ve made the corrections!! :-D)

persiflage_1 September 23 2013, 18:58:06 UTC

jjpor September 23 2013, 22:24:01 UTC

Persiflage, of course, beat me to it, but it still needs to be said: Poor Nat! And poor Tilly ( ... )

lost_spook September 24 2013, 16:12:44 UTC

Heh, so glad you enjoyed it! :-) It's still a rather awkward combination of scenes that were scattered across various notebooks and I'm still not entirely satisfied with my stitching them together, but yes, that's the general idea with Ancelyn and Tilly and all the rest, and ♥ (I'm sure Ancelyn and Tilly would get on reasonably well given more than an awkward hour or so together which, rather importantly from Tilly's pov, also involves Nat getting unnecessarily hurt.

One day I may even write up the fully drafted out missing story!! :-)