fic: Eternity [POTC Jack/Elizabeth, Jack/Pearl wip]

[lost_in_azkaban]

Title: Eternity
Fandom/Pairing: Pirates of the Caribbean: past Jack/Elizabeth, Jack/Pearl
Words: 1,276
Rating: As gen as they come. The mouse owns all.
Summary: Fountain of Youth!fic. Not canon compliant with OST. In present day, Jack Sparrow goes for a stroll about London town and finds himself face to face with an old friend.
A/N: This is only a

Comments

[aletheiafelinea]

Dreamy and nostalgic. I like your Jack.

[whensheflies]

Thank you for reading and the kind comment!

[pearlseed]

Well I'll be go to hell! Truth clear, I don't usually bother with crossing overs becos I've only read three, maybe four that were worth the effort...but oh my, you've got some cleverly set hooks, doncha? Got some diary, what might she have said? Got Jack who hasn't lost a step in his long long life everlasting, still drawing in the pretty boys and girls no doubt, with his lovely
"Dark eyes. Darker than natural with unfathomable depths. Tantalizing pools of wisdom shrouded in mystery and an undeniable power. And if one looked longer than what was considered polite, if one gazed into his obsidian eyes they would see more than a lifetime’s worth of sorrow and joy"

This description of his eyes feels like the pull of an outgoing tide, sucking the sand out from under one, bringing one along to what adventures only imagined...so go again, more please. You done stepped off in an very interesting direction, so let's have...yeah?

[triskellion]

Oh my. What a set up. I've never thought of what would happen if the legends became known. What a delightful story. I'd love to know what is in that diary that has Jack all upset.

[geekmama]

What a great tale to start my day with. I'd sure love to read more of this. Your Jack is wonderful, and I loved hearing his thoughts on the past and present.