fic: Lost Moon, J/E

[lost_in_azkaban]

Title: Lost Moon
Fandom/Pairing: Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/Elizabeth
Rating: Harmless angst
Summary: Immortality takes its toll. Jack and Elizabeth have found the Fountain of Youth and now they must learn to live with their choice and all the things that come with living forever young. Post-AWE...waaaay Post.
A/N: For im_nyoo_nyeaf who gave me the will to

Comments

[djarum99]

It’s not a habit he’s proud of, but he likes the taste and he enjoys even more the look of desire in Elizabeth’s eyes when he takes a lingering drag.

Have to tell you, I love that image and that line :-)

Lovely, and heartbreaking, especially the sorrow that Jack has learned he can't fix ♥

[whensheflies]

*clings* Thank you! <3

[pirateluver]

OMG this one was so heart breaking. They are out living their own children and their children's children. It must be really hard for poor Elizabeth... I can only imagine seeing your children pass on and here you are still going on and not againg one bit.

Did Will not come this time because perhaps he too is dead? Did they out live Will as well? Soon they are going to be the last two to roam the seas... Its almost like being the captain of the Duchess.

I want to cry... heartbreaking this was.

[whensheflies]

Don't cry! I'm really proud of this one.

And logically, Will wouldn't have been there because the kid died on land. If he would have died at sea, then Will would have had to come to ferry his soul to the underworld.