Comments | lost_carcosa: Fic - Attention, Ch. 7 of 7

ultharkitty in lost_carcosa

Fic - Attention, Ch. 7 of 7

Nov 12, 2010 06:36

Title: Attention, Chapter 7
Continuity: G1 cartoon, Dysfunction AU
Rating: R
Content advice: Plug ‘n’ play, slash, consensual sexytimes, manipulative copter
Characters and/or pairings: Vortex/Drag Strip
Summary: At last, Drag Strip has what he thinks he wants! But what is Vortex up to?
[ Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5, ( Read more... )

au: dysfunction, series: taking one for the team, continuity: g1, drag strip, vortex

Comments 4

kyra_neko_rei November 12 2010, 21:47:12 UTC

*giggles* Oh, poor Drag Strip. Or poor Vortex . . . or poor Motormaster, I'm not even sure who to feel sorry for.

Motormaster . . . needs to win and needs to lose, both, I think. He's that mixture of arrogant and insecure that just manages to grate everything the wrong way; he needs to learn to respect others AND he needs to develop some confidence that he is good enough and the occasional loss is not a threat to that.

Drag Strip needs a few lessons in interfacing.

Vortex is potentially in for a surprise if Drag Strip's infatuation is with winning rather than Vortex.

casusfere November 12 2010, 23:13:44 UTC

Ooooo. But now I wanna see more on what it is that Vortex has planned! I have a feeling that things are going to get very messy before it's all over.

-.- I very nearly posted this comment with an RP journal, and somehow this just doesn't seem to be an appropriate sentiment for Motormaster. XP
>.> Caffeine, I need you.

ayngelcat June 11 2011, 08:28:59 UTC

Glad I read this at last!

Its a good story. Stunticons are really well characterised and funny, and there's a lot of other character and world building and scene setting with both sets of gestalt mechs during the entertainment, which gives it much depth.

Wildrider - a cheeky sod.

Onslaught's endeavours and Vortex's impertinence are also a high spot; as is Dead Ends' absorption of Nietzsche. Hilarious!

ultharkitty June 11 2011, 09:27:10 UTC

Thankyou! I'm glad you like those aspects, and that you enjoyed the story :D

I think Dead End's in his adolescent Nietzsche phase :P (as opposed to his adult Nietzsche phase, which will probably come later) I'm sure he also composes bad poetry and complains loudly whenever Wildrider forces them all to watch Oprah (but he secretly enjoys it anyway).