Comments | lost_carcosa: Fic - Something to Live For, Chapter 11 of 14

ultharkitty in lost_carcosa

Fic - Something to Live For, Chapter 11 of 14

Oct 22, 2010 09:42

Title: Something to live for
Chapter 11: Countdown
Continuity: G1, Dysfunction AU
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Just playing in the sandbox, characters not mine.
Characters and/or pairings: Vortex, Wheeljack, Perceptor
Beta: naboru_narluin.
Summary: In which Vortex attempts to plan his escape, while Wheeljack and Perceptor continue with plans of their own.
Notes: Sorry ( Read more... )

au: dysfunction, wheeljack, continuity: g1, vortex, series: twister, perceptor

Comments 8

niyazi_a October 22 2010, 13:35:31 UTC

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I love this! Sorry, I have nothing coherent to say: I love your unbalanced, yet really smart Vortex, I love whatever mindgame those Autobots are playing back on him!

ultharkitty October 23 2010, 23:08:54 UTC

Thankyou! I'm glad you're liking it :D

As for the Autobots - they're playing the accidental kind. I'm probably being a bit mean to them, but that's the way it worked out in my mind.

kyra_neko_rei October 23 2010, 00:15:03 UTC

Vortex is still with the random swing of How Creepy Is He At This Particular Moment, and wonderfully smart, and you've definitely got me curious as to what's going on.

ultharkitty October 23 2010, 23:11:48 UTC

Yay! :D

I'm glad it's having that effect :D Also, How Creepy Is He At This Particular Moment sounds like a really amusing game (for people not in the same room as him :P).

casusfere October 23 2010, 06:51:23 UTC

I just wanted to say, I love this fic. XD Lovelovelove. And I wants more. There's just so many wonderful tidbits in here, too! Favorite so far: last chapter, the bit about Vortex calling Onslaught "Sir" when they interface. ^.^

ultharkitty October 23 2010, 23:13:19 UTC

Wow, thankyou! :D *has epic squee*

spacehussy November 1 2010, 05:35:34 UTC

Eee!! Oh gosh - it's been a long day and I am somewhat exhausted but I finally had a chance to sit down and catch up to this story. *so happy*

I love how Vortex and Wheeljack interact. It's so completely different from the way he interacts with the other Autobots - I'm sure Vortex could start to get under Wheeljack's skin, but it really seems like he'd have to try a little harder than he did with say, Perceptor and Skyfire. It freakin' cracks me up. *adores*

Yet again I have to remark on how fascinating it is to see Vortex's thoughts skitter back and forth from the box. I love how his fear comes through there, in how he tries to avoid thinking about it. It says so much. Oh oh, and how he starts looking for any detail in his surroundings that could help him escape, like Wheeljack and Perceptor touching~~ :D The buildup here is awesome.

I love all the gestalt bits so much ahh, like this:

Don’t rely on your team; Swindle had taught him that.

;_; and:

He couldn’t allow himself to rely on them; they hadn’t come for him yet, they ( ... )

ultharkitty November 2 2010, 07:19:23 UTC

Thankyou! :D

Right now, my brain is on hiaitus, so I'm just going to sit here and squee :D I'm so glad this is entertaining you :D \o/

*hugs* Hope you didn't crash too hard!