fic: Perfect

[lost2thewind]

Title: Perfect
Rating: PG some swearing nothing to grafic.
summery: Dick and Roy finerly share the perfect moment
notes: please tell me what you think

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Dick had just started patrol in rainy Bludheaven, when he came across a familiar person.

Strange people had turned up in his city, especially in this weather, but he would never expect

Comments

[shiny_glor_chan]

Cute fic. I enjoyed it. Though, you should have someone look it over for spelling and typos. I spotted a few.

[lost2thewind]

I have someone but she's on holiday. Thanks for the heads up, i'll try to find them.

A few tips

[rhain]

-Proper nouns should be capitalized (Such as 'Dick' and 'Post-It').
-When the statement your person is making is a question, it should end in a question mark not an exclamation point. Try using things like 'He yelled' to add your emphasis.
-At the end of a phrase for a quote use a comma instead of a period or blank air. "Yes," he said. Instead of, "Yes" He saidYou are already writing in past tense so be careful when trying to communicate timing. The first time it happens it would be "Roy came through the window." If thinking back to that point later in your fic, it would be "Roy had come through the window

Re: A few tips

[lost2thewind]

Thanks so much, i re-read it and caught some of the mistakes.Some of them i pretty stupid ones, so thanks for pointing them out to me. I'm deslexic so thank you for all your help. hopefully I will do better at my proof reading next time.

[travelincognito]

Cute :)

[lost2thewind]

thanks :)