Obscure & British Commentfest 2015

[lost_spook]

Welcome to the Obscure & British comment fest III! This is a comment fest for any small(ish) British fandom and open to all fanworks.

Comments

In the Flesh--Jemima Walker--Worthy (PG)

[timelessapeel]

Jem thinks she could do something-something great. She used to have dreams. Still does, she thinks, but somehow she can’t quite remember them, like they were from someone else’s consciousness and she just glimpsed them while passing through

Re: In the Flesh--Jemima Walker--Worthy (PG)

[waltzmatildah]

like they were from someone else’s consciousness and she just glimpsed them while passing through. Beautiful :)

And I love, love, love they way you've woven Kieren's death/life through this. You've really highlighted what Jem was going through and you've done it pefectly!

This is exactly the kind of thing I was after! THANK YOU!

Re: In the Flesh--Jemima Walker--Worthy (PG)

[timelessapeel]

Thank you! Jem can be really frustrating as a character, but you can tell she's really frustrated, too. The one thing she did to try to cope set Kieren up as the enemy, so you can understand her struggle.

Such a shame we'll have no more "In the Flesh". :-( The last episode set things up for what could have been a great third season.