Of Grace, [ONESHOT], Miyavi-centric

[losseflame]

Title: Of Grace
Author: losseflame 
Chapters: ONESHOT
Genre: Severe Angst, Drama, a little romance
Warnings: Character death, Het (as in, not yaoi. M/F people.), alcohol abuse, certain religious views
Rating: R
Pairings/Characters: Miyavi/Melody, Miyavi/Kai
Synopsis: He’s never really believed in God, but Miyavi’s cursing Him, cursing and despising and screaming

Comments

[1337_lurker]

FUCKING SPOT~!!!!
Yes, well, I'm not religious so idgaf. :D

Love the myv/melo part obviously. Once again, I don't look at it as sex. It's just another thing you're writing about, it's not blasphemous.

Love you as usual~! *huggles*

[losseflame]

*huggles back*

Writing that killed my braincells.....D:

[inner_demons_]

Oh, shit woman. This is so not my pairing, at all, I can honestly hardly stand it most of the time, nor did I have any intention of reading anything srs bsnss after just waking up but I couldn't resist because it was you and thank fucking god I did because this was perfect. I always adored your writing style and it seems to come out a lot more in this. Love the line: Kai tastes like clean and sober and calm... And of course all of Miyavi's thoughts about god and fallen angels. There's a lot of car crash related material out there, and death related as well but very, very few deal with the aftermath the way you did, especially with the religious aspect that most would assume would have to come from something like that. fdkhjvdlkfgj don't even know. Less than coherent, but fuck I loved this, like everything else you do and the last sentence was just perfect.

[losseflame]

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I LOVE YOUR COMMENTS LIKE SRSLY.

Wow, thanks for such an amazing comment. I'm glad i can make a pairing you don't really like seem good. ^^

The last line for me felt alittle unfinished and left abandoned, but I'm glad to the reader it seemed good. :)

Once again, your response made me go O___O and thanks again. ♥

[losseflame]

Thanks anyway. :)

I'm happy that you think it's beautiful.

Much love for the comment!

[shadow_fictions]

._.

*flails in floods of tears, then happineeeeeees*

aww this was pretty darned amazing. :3

[losseflame]

Why, thank you, lovely! Glad you liked it!

Thanks for commenting!

[shadow_fictions]

no problem *nod nod*

:D

[camikaza]

I like this one...although you write about sex, it's not about smut at all, and I love the way how you describe the situation of someone having his brother ripped away from him in a car accident.... You really handled well Melody's patience and yet hopelessness... I like that a lot^^

Towards the end of your fic, you sometimes jump between Past and Present tense, but nothing really bothering...

Keep it up like this!

[losseflame]

I can't write smut at all, but I can add elements of of it. XD

I tried to capture melody's reaction realisticallly, so i'm glad it worked out.

Did I? I'll go back and fix that, then.

Thanks!