SGA Challenge - A Letter (1 of 1)

May 18, 2011 21:23

SGA Challenge #7 (I think)

Rating: G

Disclaimer: SGA and everything therein is not mine. I'm just visiting.

The challenge was to write a letter. The loose limit was 1,000 word.

The Letter

The Letter )

sheppard, sga

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patk May 19 2011, 18:27:58 UTC
Oh, I like this very much. That's the first time I read something about John's relationship to his father that had the twist of Patrick actually being proud of John for pushing back even if it put a lot of strain on their father/son-relationship.

Glad you wrote and posted this, thank you. :-)

P.S. I actually forgot to mention: at first I was really a little afraid it could be Dave who was reading the letter and John was dead (or missing). *g*

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lorr54 May 20 2011, 01:03:46 UTC
Thank you! I am glad you liked it. I think John's relationship with his Dad was one of a father with great plans for a son and who was bitterly disappointed that son didn't want the life planned for him. the father had too much pride to forgive and the son realized all too well how much he disappointed the old man, and maybe had a little pride of his own.

Also, I did write it so that there was room to think John was dead. ;)

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abracah May 20 2011, 01:10:31 UTC
Love this even more the second time around. Thanks for playing!

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lorr54 May 20 2011, 01:12:26 UTC
Aw, thank you! this one gave me an opportunity to write something I've wanted to write but could never fit into anything.

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