Comments | lornrocks: Some sad times.

lornrocks

Some sad times.

Nov 06, 2010 01:32

Fic: Don't Leave Me Like This
Rating: PGish
Characters/Pairings: Peter/Sylar, Claire
Summary: Briefly, he entertains the notion of digging the gun out of the bedside table and seeing if he can make it stick this time, but something in the back of his head tells him that he wouldn't like that.Warnings: (Unbeta'd)Angst, character death, sadness, ( Read more... )

characterdeath, peter/sylar, fanfic, heroes, romance, fanfic: don't leave me like this, slash, petlar, angst, sylar/peter, timeline, asingleman, pylar, rating: pg, sadness, claire, emokid

Comments 13

punk4life1315 November 6 2010, 09:30:45 UTC

:'(
Why must you make me cry?

I liked the story though and how it went backwards. That was really interesting.

lornrocks November 6 2010, 19:20:55 UTC

Thank you for reading, and also, I'm sorry. Was the warning sufficient enough? I always wonder about these things.

punk4life1315 November 6 2010, 20:50:46 UTC

it's all good and the warning was sufficient. I had an idea of what I was going to read.

lornrocks November 6 2010, 21:02:50 UTC

That's good.

Awwww your icon.

darlingicequeen November 6 2010, 16:29:52 UTC

Awesome, sweetheart. Totally loved it, even though it made me sad. I really like that writing style and your going backwards in the timeline. If you want to experiment a bit with the timelines you could also try one story that jumps between here and then, like the one Torchwood CoE-fix with the alternate Ianto.

lornrocks November 6 2010, 19:16:33 UTC

Oh my God, that fic was SO amazing.

I actually just read an Arthur/Eames fic that was like that, and I loved it, but I'm not sure if I can jump back and forth, you know?

I'm not too good at planning ahead.

lornrocks November 6 2010, 19:16:43 UTC

Also, thank you. :D

xenasoul November 8 2010, 05:22:08 UTC

Beautifuly written, hon. This brought tears to my eyes.

lornrocks November 8 2010, 06:06:15 UTC

I'm so glad, thank you for reading.

laurazel November 8 2010, 13:32:31 UTC

"A Single Man" is totally a masterpiece. The layouts, the story, the emotions, the colours...
And you succeeded to give to this amazingly done fic the same feelings!
I can see the same gray layer on the reality and the same vivid colours on the memories. I'm stunned and so moved right now... it's perfect! <3

lornrocks November 8 2010, 15:54:38 UTC

<3 Thank you so much for this lovely comment! And thank you for reading.

multipledigits November 9 2010, 01:43:55 UTC

God, this was upsetting, and I mean that in the best way possible. You've done an excellent job with characterization and flow. You made me ache for Gabriel's loss.

"before he even realizes he's been saying those things out loud"
What a powerful image. I can just see him absolutely in shock and not even aware that he was speaking.

Lovely.

lornrocks November 9 2010, 02:10:58 UTC

Thank you, I always try and break away from my usual schmoop, so it means a lot that people are responding so well to my writing.

Thanks for reading. :)

(I like your icon btw.)