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lornrocks

Fic

Oct 05, 2010 02:20

Fic: I Wanna Hold Your Hand ( Read more... )

fiveplusone, whatever, peter/sylar, fanfic, handholding, heroes, others, romance, quixotic, rating: r, i'moverdramatic, slash, violence, petlar, noah, mohinder, angst, sylar/peter, pylar, matt, emma, angela, 5+1, claire, fanfic: i wanna hold your hand

Comments 19

game_byrd October 5 2010, 10:24:04 UTC

Didn't read much of the end, once I figured out where it was going. Please warn for character death in future. Don't like those.

lornrocks October 5 2010, 13:47:51 UTC

Hmmm, I didn't want to give too much away, you know? Ugh.

If only I could remember how to do white text in HTML I could do the "hilight to read" thing.

But I'm sorry.

game_byrd October 5 2010, 13:51:01 UTC

I dunno. Maybe put the letters "CD" for Character Death in the warnings? It would mean something to me, but it wouldn't spoil it for anyone else.

lornrocks October 5 2010, 14:13:52 UTC

I'll message you privately and tell you, ha ha.

game_byrd October 5 2010, 11:19:51 UTC

Oh, and I should have said more than just that by itself. It's good fic! I especially liked #3. It made me melt a little inside. I like the domesticity in your fics, Gabriel's hair sticking up awkwardly... I liked the scene outside of Angela's apartment, with Gabriel pretending to pay attention to something down the hall and her giving up on her hate/intolerance so she could have her son back ( ... )

lornrocks October 5 2010, 13:48:34 UTC

But thank you! I love dometicity too, obviously. Which is kind of weird, but you know, I guess I just want to see normalcy in their lives.

mellyna October 5 2010, 13:32:09 UTC

Wonderful work. You wrote the boys so well in this. Thanks for sharing.

lornrocks October 5 2010, 13:43:45 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

punk4life1315 October 5 2010, 18:45:02 UTC

oh, poor Gabriel! great story though.

lornrocks October 5 2010, 21:53:15 UTC

Thanks!

Yeah, I dunno. I blame Torchwood for making me write stuff like this.

Damn you, immortality!

anonymiss731 October 5 2010, 22:43:03 UTC

Damn it Lorn....you got me crying in the middle of a hallway. I must look like such a weirdo. Fuck...Pull it in, pull it in. This is so fucked up. I always assume that Peter will just have Gabe fix his power then he'll live forever. And I don't even take into account people going nuts and using him to get Gabe. It's totally real. It's the fucked up reality of things. Especially with immortal characters. Now I've got ten minutes to get a grip before class starts. Think about happy things, think about happy things. Shit I need to go find fluff fic. *hugs* I love your emotion causing fics.

lornrocks October 5 2010, 23:23:36 UTC

I'm so glad! Most people like, hate on me when I write emotional fics, so I'm genuinely touched when I can inspire a reaction.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I hope you feel better soon.

anonymiss731 October 6 2010, 03:14:39 UTC

Haters!
Don't pay them any mind....There just upset they can't make ppl cry whenever they want.

lornrocks October 6 2010, 04:43:24 UTC

Your icon is win, btw.

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