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[lornrocks]

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[asmodesgold]

O_O that was not the happy ending i was promised!!!!!!!!

...good story though XP

[asmodesgold]

now i'm depressed...i need a happy fic! *-*

[lornrocks]

I'll get on that for sure.

But I wanted to surprise people, it must have worked.

Thanks for reading.

[mellyna]

Great piece. Not the ending I was expecting. Thanks for sharing.

[lornrocks]

Finally, a positive comment on the ending!

Ha.

Thanks for reading and commenting though. :)

[adrian_chan]

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...Well, at least Sophia died...

[lornrocks]

Ha ha, I love how much I just pissed off literally everyone who has been following this story.

And I hate to break your bubble, but she was never real to begin with.

Oops.

Thanks for reading though!

[adrian_chan]

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I have no words.

I like your icon. :)

[lornrocks]

I think sometime after the fifth time of seeing Inception, and then watching like, The Dark Knight and other similarly sad shit, I was like, wouldn't it be a great idea if I just kept killing Peter off? (Even though he's my favorite. But I digress). And several of my friends said an ending like that would be, and I quote, "Really good and unexpected". Huh.

I could write an alternate ending, ha.

But thank you! I like yours! Ha ha.

[lornrocks]

Because I'm evil.

But thank you for reading.

[kikamontanez]

Gah?! Why?! Great story, but the ending was *sniffles* At least Noah was still a sexy beast.

[lornrocks]

It can't be a story without a Noah Bennett one liner.

And again, I guess I wanted to try something other than a happy ending. I like to blame all the movies I've been watching lately.

But thanks so much for reading.