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asmodesgold July 19 2010, 12:01:30 UTC
D:D:D:D:

happy ending...right? *sniffles*

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lornrocks July 19 2010, 20:37:51 UTC
Of course!

...As soon as I figure out how that's going to happen. Ha ha.

Good times.

Thanks again for reading.

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kikamontanez July 19 2010, 12:12:30 UTC
*picks up computer and hurls it across the room* WHY?!!!!!!!!!!
Next part please :)

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lornrocks July 19 2010, 20:36:17 UTC
It'll be here as soon as my brain figures out how to do it, ha ha!

Thanks so much for reading.

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darlingicequeen July 19 2010, 12:24:46 UTC
This didn't suck at all, sweetheart. Nice idea to mix up the dream-walking ability with Parkman's whammy.

To be honest I'm getting a tiny little bit impatient now, I'm not used to Peter and Sylar being separated for so long in your stories. I just want them to get together and kiss and be happy. See, typical fangirl, can't handle any complexity ;)

Still like the course of action the story takes and I have faith in you that you will provide the fans with an adequate reunion in the end.

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lornrocks July 19 2010, 20:35:49 UTC
I'm still not 100% convinced I know what the ending to this will be yet, I'm just sort of winging it as I go along, but you know me, I'm a sappy romantic. They'll have their reunion.

But thanks so much for reading and your comments help so much! <3

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adrian_chan July 19 2010, 14:59:21 UTC
I feel like they're idiots and Sylar's going to kill them all.

Aww, poor Peter...

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lornrocks July 19 2010, 20:34:06 UTC
I'm not that evil. I was thinking it would be less dramatic than that. :P

But thanks for reading!

And yes, poor Peter. All the bad shit happens to him on that show.
Well, okay, it's more like all the bad shit happens to Matt. But I digress.

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adrian_chan July 19 2010, 22:08:54 UTC
Well, all the irritating and maddening bad shit happens to Peter (i.e. Power loss, evil dad, Nathan's a douche-bag, Angela's...Angela, all his girlfriends disappear), while all the bad stuff that we actually want to see happen happens to Matt (i.e. stuck with Sylar in his brain).

lol.

Less dramatic than that? Well, I can't say I'm not slightly disappointed. :P I just like Sylar bad. But I still can't wait for the next chapter!

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lornrocks July 19 2010, 22:23:42 UTC
We'll see if we can compromise, here. I'll see what I can do. :)

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xenasoul July 21 2010, 04:16:42 UTC
OMG
I can totally understand Angela wanting to revenge Nathan but this is harsh on Peter! It broke my heart the last line where a tear rolled in his cheek. *sigh*
I'm sad for Gabriel too. Poor things!

But what can I say? I love to see them suffer.
Please more!!

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lornrocks July 21 2010, 04:28:54 UTC
Obviously I like torturing them too, or I wouldn't write this stuff, ha ha. :P

I'll work on writing the next part tonight. Thanks for your lovely comment!

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