It got a bit confusing at bits so I ended up re-reading it a couple times, but that's likely just as much my reading at 1:30 in the morning as it being an interesting story style
I still loved it <3 (and oh Peter, you always need help with your powers don't you?)
And also? The image of them killing zombies made me think of Shaun of the Dead which brought up the image of them throwing records at zombies which I'm still giggling about.
Sylar and Peter would be the awesomest zombie killers ever, being BAMF. Or else they'd make jokes the whole time and just act like nerds that everyone else wants them to shut up. OR A MIX OF BOTH!
And no need to thank me! I was it was by you and I was all "WILL READ NOW! I can put off sleep for a few more minutes!"
(but on that note, I am going to sleep and hopefully I'll have muse to write tomorrow)
Confusing and very original and entertaining. I'd love to see this one on TV! I have a thing for weird dream episodes, like the one in Buffy with the man holding the cheese and the first slayer. The one thing I love more than dream episodes is stuck-in-a-time-loop episodes.
Of course confusing was meant in the best sense, bb. Peter falling from one dream into another is confusing for him after all and so it is for the reader who is witnessing everything through his point of view not knowing where the story is heading. And this is a good thing IMHO. I love that you're not afraid to try new things and territories in your stories.
I dunno, I'm just so right brained that I just get inspired by everything. And also, I'm just SO FUCKING EXCITED for Inception to come out, I think that's translated over into this story.
Thanks so much for the feedback, though, it really does help. :)
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I still loved it <3 (and oh Peter, you always need help with your powers don't you?)
And also? The image of them killing zombies made me think of Shaun of the Dead which brought up the image of them throwing records at zombies which I'm still giggling about.
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And you know, your confusion probably comes from me writing it jet lagged and half asleep. But it fits the theme, I think, ha ha.
Thanks for reading!
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And no need to thank me! I was it was by you and I was all "WILL READ NOW! I can put off sleep for a few more minutes!"
(but on that note, I am going to sleep and hopefully I'll have muse to write tomorrow)
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Thanks for reading.
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Thanks so much for the feedback, though, it really does help. :)
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