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a_little_push July 11 2010, 08:34:33 UTC
It got a bit confusing at bits so I ended up re-reading it a couple times, but that's likely just as much my reading at 1:30 in the morning as it being an interesting story style

I still loved it <3 (and oh Peter, you always need help with your powers don't you?)

And also? The image of them killing zombies made me think of Shaun of the Dead which brought up the image of them throwing records at zombies which I'm still giggling about.

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lornrocks July 11 2010, 08:38:27 UTC
Pssssh, Shaun of the Dead is the most amazing zombie movie ever, Period. But I just finished a Torchwood novel with zombies so I was inspired.

And you know, your confusion probably comes from me writing it jet lagged and half asleep. But it fits the theme, I think, ha ha.

Thanks for reading!

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a_little_push July 11 2010, 08:48:07 UTC
Sylar and Peter would be the awesomest zombie killers ever, being BAMF. Or else they'd make jokes the whole time and just act like nerds that everyone else wants them to shut up. OR A MIX OF BOTH!

And no need to thank me! I was it was by you and I was all "WILL READ NOW! I can put off sleep for a few more minutes!"

(but on that note, I am going to sleep and hopefully I'll have muse to write tomorrow)

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lornrocks July 11 2010, 08:50:43 UTC
I can't wait to read what else you write. I need to sleep myself. Toodles, I suppose.

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xenasoul July 11 2010, 08:50:20 UTC
What a fantastic and creative verse you did here. I loved it!

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lornrocks July 11 2010, 08:51:04 UTC
Thanks so much! <3 I think sleep deprivation and too much sci fi has gotten to my brain, ha ha.

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darlingicequeen July 11 2010, 12:47:36 UTC
Confusing and very original and entertaining. I'd love to see this one on TV! I have a thing for weird dream episodes, like the one in Buffy with the man holding the cheese and the first slayer. The one thing I love more than dream episodes is stuck-in-a-time-loop episodes.

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lornrocks July 11 2010, 18:50:21 UTC
Right? I'm not sure if confusing is a compliment as far as this story goes, but in my head in makes perfect sense. Oh well, I'm glad you liked it. :)

Thanks for reading.

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darlingicequeen July 11 2010, 19:06:59 UTC
Of course confusing was meant in the best sense, bb. Peter falling from one dream into another is confusing for him after all and so it is for the reader who is witnessing everything through his point of view not knowing where the story is heading. And this is a good thing IMHO. I love that you're not afraid to try new things and territories in your stories.

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lornrocks July 11 2010, 19:12:26 UTC
I dunno, I'm just so right brained that I just get inspired by everything. And also, I'm just SO FUCKING EXCITED for Inception to come out, I think that's translated over into this story.

Thanks so much for the feedback, though, it really does help. :)

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darlingicequeen July 11 2010, 20:03:18 UTC
Oh yeah, Inception, can't wait to see it either. It's got the best ratings on IMDB already.

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lornrocks July 11 2010, 20:12:22 UTC
I've been reading articles on it and I still don't know what it's about. Huh.

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