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lorib12

Self Denial

May 01, 2011 14:53

A/N: Here’s part one of two shot House/Wilson fic. My first in awhile and it really is written kind of strange. I’m really trying to get back into the swing of things so hopefully you’ll bear with me as my muse slowly emerges from the depths. All comments are appreciated and truly needed to try and build my self confidence up. Please try to be nice ( Read more... )

h/w, slash, pg-13, angst

Comments 9

lylaa May 1 2011, 20:19:33 UTC

Quite sad. I hope you write a sequel. I would love to see the conversation that follows.

lorib12 May 1 2011, 21:00:54 UTC

I changed to TBC for a sequel. I think it turned out a bit stale and needs something more. Thanks for the idea and thanks so much for reading and commenting!

yarroway May 1 2011, 22:07:26 UTC

Something new from you!! Excellent! I'm happy you're going to continue this, as there are several loose ends here. I want to see where you take it and what happens. It seems pretty dark but well-written.

lorib12 May 2 2011, 23:26:10 UTC

Yes, shiny new and all over the place. It's going to be slow going I think getting back into the swing of things but thank's so much for your support. Putting up sequel now, hopefully it's understandable. Thanks again :)

mmorgan317 May 2 2011, 03:00:06 UTC

I agree with yarroway - it is very well written. Poor Wilson. But at the same time, it's a taste of his own medicine.

I look forward to the sequel!

lorib12 May 2 2011, 23:24:38 UTC

Sequel will be up in minutes. Thanks for the kind words and yeah Wilson does kinda deserve it but the sequel is kinda weird I just hope it's understandable. Thanks so much for reading and commenting :)

leakey_lover May 2 2011, 18:36:47 UTC

What a treat. I rarely even visit LJ anymore, and here you are and a nice job, too. See? Treats.

Good that you're writing and well and when can we expect the next part?

Does this mean I'll be able to write again too?

lorib12 May 2 2011, 23:21:48 UTC

I've been gone so long too. Thanks for the kind words and next part is up now. I warn you, it's a bit weird though. And yes, you will write again :)

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lorib12 May 3 2011, 10:06:54 UTC

see part 2 where he figures out he doesn't deserve it. I know this seemed a bit harsh hence the sequel. As far as Julie, just used a bit of writers privalage ;) Good to hear from you!