What's To Come Is Still Unsure (2/16?)

[lorelaisquared]

Title: What's to Come is still Unsure(2/16?)
Author: lorelaisquared
Rating: PG-13
Characters: TenII, Rose, Jackie
Word Count: 3727
Beta: The incredible cookie2697
Summary: Part One in an epic love story spanning time and space: When the Doctor abandons Rose in Pete's world with his counterpart, they must learn to live without him. Slowly they build a life together that

Comments

[wiggiemomsi]

Hooray, hooray, you posted the next chapter!

This is one of my favorite chapters, probably because - as pointed out above - it's so sweet and fluffy. It's where Rose and Ten II finally ... errr ... "fade to black" and wake up in each others arms *sigh!*, and where baby TARDIS is rapidly growing into adolescent TARDIS because of it.

I notice changes and additions here and there in the chapter; not being a writer myself, I'm fascinated by how tweaking a few words and adding more information makes a difference in how much smoother a story flows.

GREAT JOB!!

*Hugs*

[lorelaisquared]

I did! I did!

Awww I'm so glad you like this one. It is rather sweet and fluffy isn't it? LOL yes, the infamous "fade to black" ... perhaps one day I can be persuaded to write a missing scene fic that is NOT rated Pg-13... *g*... I love how you call it Baby!TARDIS and adolescent!TAARDIS... it makes me squee!

I was wondering if you'd notice the changes - well some are obvious - there are two entire scenes that weren't there at all before. I think I added almost 2 pages to this chapter in the end. I have an incredible beta who has a knack for picking out the places where I can push myself to make it *that* much better. I think I've really grown as a writer as a result. And isn't it amazing how little details can make a huge difference? The power or words...

*hugs* thanks... :)

[potcwriterangel]

That was a really cool idea here. Excellent chapter. I'm eager for more info about what was with the Ood. And more Rose/Doctor loving of course. :D

[lorelaisquared]

Awww I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you. All questions will be answered... in time. And of course there is much more Rose/Doctor wonderfulness to come! :) Thanks for reading

[lorelaisquared]

Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying the fluff and love. They're so adorable when they're like this.

Yes! I love the Ood too! I'm glad you're enjoying their appearance.

[emraldeyedauter]

Aw that is so sweet. I am quite enjoying this. I am sure they will need a strong relationship as I suspect its not going to be all raising a Tardis and fun.

[lorelaisquared]

YAY! Thank you! I'm thrilled you're enjoying this so much. Thanks for reading! :)

[mchun]

what a wonderful chapter your writing is amazing, im really enjoying this fic :D

[lorelaisquared]

Awwwww thank you so much, I'm honoured that you think so. I'm glad you're enjoying :)