[Fic] Blink (10/10)

Aug 15, 2014 13:12

Title: Blink
Recipient/Trope: Bodyswap for gatewaygirl
Username: lordes
Betas: lordhellebore, amorette
Pairings: Harry/Draco. Mentions of: Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione, Draco/Astoria, Draco/Blaise, Ginny/Oliver.
Characters: Harry, Draco, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, George, Arthur, Molly, Kingsley, Hawkes Hawlish, Auror Williamson, Lucius Malfoy, Narcissa Malfoy, Voldemort, Bellatrix, Nott, ( Read more... )

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lordhellebore September 16 2014, 15:06:17 UTC
I've finally re-read this, and I like it even better now than when I beta-read, because now I had the time to truly read and enjoy it :)

I really liked how Harry felt trapped in this huge house, without knowing, really, what he could do to speed things along. And Woldy is completely darling, especially him being Dobby's son ♥

But what I like most of all is how Harry and Draco have these glimpses into each other's lives through the memories, and that it doesn't only let them know what happened, but also how the other felt about it. Harry having feelings for Lucius and Narcissa was my favourite part of this - maybe because he never got to experience how it is to have parents, and now he knows and got to feel that at least in this way.

What I forgot to add: The man in the top hat - I like that you kept him a mystery. not many people do this, leaving something unexplained, but it adds something to the story, I think.

I hope to read more of you soon ;)

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lordes October 7 2014, 14:57:57 UTC
I love mysteries, and I'm a great fan of not explaining every detail in your story or book. I'm glad I pulled it off in such a way people found it acceptable, because I was a bit nervous about leaving it open ended at first.

You're always so sweet when you reread my stories after you've already beta read them! I can never really believe how dedicated you seem to be.

I love you tons and tons!

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