Merlin Fic - The Tempest - Part 2

[lorannah]

PART 1

Comments

[srin]

Oh, goodness, this is just heartbreaking. But beautiful, too - the prose is lovely, lyrical and full of great imagery, and the emotion of the whole thing is just so intense. Poor Merlin.

[lorannah]

Thank you so much, this was a lovely first comment to receive. I'm really glad the emotion worked for you, I was a little worried I was overdoing it. :D

[fresica]

Oh my... That is a beautifully constructed story. I love the feel of Merlin's despair and Arthur's fear, and both of them still wanting hope and optimism so desperately. It's so amazing and gorgeous. Possibly one of the best M/A fics I've seen in a while. Thanks for sharing it!

[lorannah]

Thank you so much, this is a truly lovely comment and that's absolutely massive praise. Really made my day. :D

[archaeologist_d]

This was wonderful. Such intense emotions and the way Arthur and Merlin spun around each other. Loved that Arthur was the only one to get Merlin to stop.

[lorannah]

Thank you so much. In my head I can't seem to stop Arthur and Merlin spinning around each other, not that I mind. :D

[phoenixacid]

Lovely and poignant. This fic has a quiet, wrenching quality to it that I really enjoyed. I really feel for Merlin in this.

[lorannah]

Thank you so much, this was a lovely comment to get. :D

[shinkonokokoro]

Oh dear. Perfectly lovely, this is. I love your portrayal of the characters here. They're so beautifully broken. Brilliant writing.