Got a Light - Chapter 24

[loracj]

We're nearing the end of Frankie and Ryan's journey. Thanks as always to

mel39 for her stellar beta services,

and to 60schic for her assistance in finding the right voice.

catch up here

Comments

[brandywine421]

:D

\o/

All is right with the world. :D

[loracj]

Yup. You know me - I'm all about the fluffy happy ending.
May still write an epilogue....not sure yet.

[fredsmith518]

nicely done!
I liked the 'random' beach meeting.

[loracj]

Thanks. They had to meet somewhere where they'd both been before, otherwise it wouldn't have been 'kismet', right?

[helen_c]

See? See, how well things can go when you open your mouth and communicate?

Ha!

Very nice! :)

[loracj]

Glad you liked....and yes, things are much better when you make sure that people know what you mean.

[60schic]

*sigh* Even knowing where you were going, I still read this with rapt attention and anxiety....you were very effective in this whole chapter, my dear. You did get both of their voices down right, IMHO.

Both of these exchanges made me laugh: “Sure,” he offered. “What do you need to know?”
“Everything?” I admitted.

“You couldn’t even find your sunglasses, and they were on your head,”
“I’ve done that before, and sober too,” I admitted....yeah---me too.

Can I hear a big "AWWWWWWW"? And what do you mean, *may* write an epilogue? You surely WILL write one, Missy!

[loracj]

Since Frankie has some of my 'attributes', I had to include the sunglasses one, since I've been there more times than I care to admit.......I've also needed recaps of what happened before too...

I think you know what the epilogue will bring.....

[60schic]

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

[zbyszko]

YAY! They worked things out. I agree with 60schic about the epilogue. : )

[loracj]

It's my story, so they had to work it out. I'm such a mush pot.
Epilogue to follow - since there seems to be a consensus.