Ring of Fire *Don; PG-13/k*

[loozy]

Title: Ring of Fire
Series: Ring of Fire
Universe: Ulysses
Author: loozy
Characters: Don, barest mention of others
Rating: PG- 13/ K
Summary: The first time he is hit, Don is about to open his car door.
Word Count: # 164; # 148; # 171; # 140; # 181; # 107; # 196; # 136; # 207; # 118; # 233; # 140
Spoilers: none
Notes: Inspired by the challenge on hurt_don and

Comments

[loozy]

Yes!!!

*does the Dance of Joy*

Sorry it was late, again, but I am very very very glad you enjoyed it!!!

[jelsemium]

Nice work on these! Poor Donnie, I really felt for him.

I have one tiny complaint, but it was distracting when you kept using 'petrol' when Americans would say 'gas'.

[loozy]

Ah, okay...

I'm sorry about that... I didn't know :(

[aleo_70]

Oh, fun!

He tries so hard but knows he has failed, seeking the blackness to protect him from the horror of being burned alive. *shudder*

Don is fortunate indeed that the mysterious 'bum' comes across him in the nick of time and decides to help. Hope he wasn't injured too badly and receives care somewhere.

I am amazed that you were able to inject some humour in Don's thoughts as well despite the dire predicament.

Now the question remains - who would do such a thing? So cold and deliberate.

[loozy]

And this is the second time that this has happened to him, hasn't it? Though the first time I wrote some serious whump was in the future when the child that Robin is pregnant with in this story is 4- years- old ;)

I'm not so sure right now if this drabble series will get a sequel with consequences etc, though... Hm... Oh, I have an idea on how to involve Billy and get him back to LA which then would tie in to the other fic...

Hm... Lemme think...

[melissima]

Eep! DOOOON! Your description of the blows to his head made me sick to my stomach, in sympathy.

I feel really bad for Robin too, going through all this trauma and worry while pregnant.

Please tell me you're going to get him out of all this soon!

[loozy]

Well, he will come out of the hospital at some point, but that does not mean that I will stop with the whumping in my 'verse any time soon *mwuahahahahahahahahaha...*

Plus, there is always the prequel to my other whump!fic which will be graphic, too... Hm...

I'm sorry, I can't promise that I will get him out of the whump, but there will be light moments, too...

Thanks for reading and enjoying :)

[melissima]

Listen to that evil laugh of yours! /envies it./

There can *never* be enough whump. :D

[loozy]

Nope, definitely not :)

More whump will be coming from me... *more evil laughing* Can't wait to write it :)