Silence & Safety Part 15: Highway *David, mention of others; PG-13/K*

May 27, 2009 22:07

Title: Highway
Series: Silence and Safety *15/21*
Author: loozy
Characters: David, mention of others
Rating: PG- 13/ K
Summary: Every day David passes more than one accident on the highway. At least one of them will cause a traffic jam in which David will be stuck then.
Word Count: 295
Spoilers: after 5x21, Disturbed
Notes: On to David...
Prompt: # ( Read more... )

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magisterequitum May 27 2009, 20:44:20 UTC
I just got caught up on the past several ones that I have missed; apologies I have been busy as of late.

I really like this one for David. And not just because it is David. But because we do this. We keep busy so we don't think of things and then something small like being stuck and traffic brings all that doing to a stop and we are forced to think.

Brava.

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loozy May 27 2009, 21:45:17 UTC
Wow.

That's actually all I can say. Wow. Thank you so so so much :)

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valeriev84 May 27 2009, 21:34:51 UTC
Nice. I have always wondered how poor David felt, thrust in the hot seat so suddenly with everyone and even his partner comparing him to Don. You portrayed it nicely here.

Who's next?

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loozy May 27 2009, 21:46:10 UTC
Thank you :)

The next part is Don & Robin, dancing :D

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valeriev84 May 27 2009, 21:55:29 UTC
Ooo

I'm intrigued already!

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loozy May 27 2009, 22:03:17 UTC
*cough*Beta???*cough*

I know it's presumptuous but I am not too sure about the fic, if it works, so I'd love to get a second opinion in before posting...

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loozy May 28 2009, 14:00:11 UTC
Thank you very very much :)

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emmademarais May 28 2009, 08:47:40 UTC
Oh, I like this! People don't often go inside David's head, but I like it when they do. It's especially good now that he's in a leadership role, but it's so much more meaningful here since he's still worried about Don getting injured and not just focused on the job.

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loozy May 28 2009, 13:58:47 UTC
Thank you very much... That is exactly what I was going for and I'm glad you saw it :D

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rubynye May 31 2009, 03:42:05 UTC
Oh, David. This makes me want to hug him.

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loozy June 3 2009, 21:16:11 UTC
Yeah, more insight into him was needed 'cuz we did not get enough in the show...

Thanks for reviewing :D

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