Comments | lookninjas: Because You Left, Chapter Sixteen

lookninjas

Because You Left, Chapter Sixteen

Mar 11, 2012 08:01

Title: Because You Left, Chapter Sixteen: Ask Me No More Questions
Pairing/Character(s): Blaine Anderson, Ben Linus Anderson, Carole Hudson, Leslie Arzt (aka Paul Karofsky), Burt Hummel
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Potential hostage situation (averted), very threatening language. Don't make Ben Linus angry. You wouldn't like him when he's angry.
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crossover, fic, burt hummel deserves all of the mugs, ben linus has a goddamn baton, you got some arzt on you, because blaine, lost, carole hudson-hummel: girl detective, glee, because you left

Comments 17

flaming_muse March 15 2012, 01:37:46 UTC

Your Carole here is positively marvelous! And I love drugged-but-tying-to-be-independent Blaine. So many wonderful character moments and connections, as well as plot movement, of course. :)

lookninjas March 15 2012, 11:32:27 UTC

I had so much fun writing Stoned!Blaine. You have no idea.

(And yes, I did go back and watch the "yaaaaay" scene from Michael like a hundred times. Yaaaaaay. Yaaaay.)

sinkwriter March 26 2012, 22:20:31 UTC

Just some of my musings as I read this chapter ( ... )

lookninjas March 27 2012, 02:43:41 UTC

In all honesty? By the time I wrote this scene, I was kind of immensely frustrated by the research I was trying (and failing) to do in terms of the hospital stuff (seriously, you don't know how hard it is to find good info on a non-lethal gunshot wound), so I was kind of just winging it. My thought at the time of writing the scene was that with someone who is being sedated for surgery, they probably wouldn't just leave the contacts in for however long and would take them out. But it's also possible that the contacts were removed afterwards and Ben either tossed them (because all their stuff is still at McKinley and he doesn't have a case and there are SO MANY OTHER THINGS TO THINK ABOUT he can have a fresh pair tomorrow when he goes home) or actually did scrounge a case and some solution from a nurse, but Blaine was too stoned/unconscious at the time to really know and is still not really sober. So basically, I'm totally claiming unreliable narrator privilege on this one ( ... )