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New Chapters - Chapter Two

Jun 29, 2010 19:46

New Chapters - Chapter Two
Yunho/Changmin
PG

Changmin works in a bookstore, where a stranger walks in one day.

( Just a lovestruck idiot wanting you so much it hurts. )

genre: au, chaptered, author: avarisia, pairing: yunho/changmin, rating: pg

Comments 14

nivani June 29 2010, 12:53:09 UTC

omg, this turns out to be pretty exciting @-@
the ending is something definitely unexpected, I'm so curious! XD

I really love Yunho's character too ^^
♥

avarisia June 29 2010, 13:04:52 UTC

Thanks! Haha yes this fic is evolving into more of a Korean drama than I really intended, but it's fun! XD

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avarisia June 30 2010, 16:53:17 UTC

Haha I think I get too carried away with the Jaemin, because writing the snarky barbs between them is so much fun! XD

Glad you love this, thanks for the comments! Hopefully I can finish Chapter 3 by next week... :)

enolha June 29 2010, 17:38:04 UTC

Spot for me!

enolha July 1 2010, 06:11:54 UTC

Sorry took me so long...
But I so loved this chap, that's not even funny... I love your shy HoMin! And the Jaejoong-Changmin friendship...and... Did I see JaeChun there?

Me, I get full easily, but I get hungry even faster. It's quite a pain
I can understand perfectly Yunho. It's the same with me T_T
It's a pain indeed...

What happened to Mr. Park?! *cries*

Anyway... Keep writting, you're very talented ^^

avarisia July 1 2010, 15:17:57 UTC

Thanks for the very encouraging comments! Haha yes there's a hint of JaeChun there, you're right. :P

Still having a headache over Chapter 3 sigh, will take a while to post that one.

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avarisia June 30 2010, 16:54:17 UTC

Thanks! :)

kurogoma June 30 2010, 02:10:05 UTC

wonderful update!

i like how yunho and changmin were getting to know each other during dinner....it`s like we, as readers, were getting to know them a little better too. i hope yunho will be one of those rare persons who will be able to embrace changmin`s frank brutal honesty (like how jaejoong did) and see it as his charm.

and LMAO at yoochun`s allergy. jaechun is such a precious pair

update soon! :))

avarisia June 30 2010, 16:58:25 UTC

Yup I love writing scenes where Yunho and Changmin get to know each other and fall in love, because that's the best part, isn't it?

Haha yeah I'm having a lot of fun with Jaejoong and Yoochun's characters too.

Thanks and I'll try to get the next chapter out by next week. ^__^