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We Intertwined (The World Will Never Do)

Jul 08, 2010 12:22

Title: We Intertwined (The World Will Never Do)
Author: longerthanwedo
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Summary: It’s I love you and don’t cry and it’s you and me, Sammy, can you tell me that’s not right?
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters and am in no way associated with those that do.
Author’s Note: This is my first ever Sam/Dean fic. This is my first ever ( Read more... )

tv: supernatural, pairing: sam winchester/dean winchester, writing: fanfiction, writing: slash

Comments 13

spoons1899 July 8 2010, 21:23:15 UTC

Gorgeous. I love the italics, it's powerful and has the potential to be gimmicky but isn't at all in this piece. I love the flow, the pace of the words. It reads beautifully, with just enough ambiguity and sweetness and sadness too. Lovely.

longerthanwedo July 8 2010, 21:25:59 UTC

Wow, thank you very much for your comment. I'm glad you liked this, you've inspired me to write more now. Thanks!

spoons1899 July 8 2010, 21:31:16 UTC

You're welcome! And yes, write more please! :)

spoons1899 July 8 2010, 21:31:52 UTC

Also, is your title a possible combination of a Hush Sound song and a Cobra Starship song?

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devon99 July 8 2010, 22:09:53 UTC

Lovely.

longerthanwedo July 8 2010, 22:29:37 UTC

Thank you.

abeautifullie3 July 9 2010, 04:38:06 UTC

Nicely done. I look forward to seeing more from you.

Oh, and as for this being your first Supernatural fic: Woot! Welcome to the delicious and often oh so wrong insanity!

longerthanwedo July 9 2010, 04:43:22 UTC

Thanks so much! Haha, I'm glad to be a part of the insanity.

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longerthanwedo July 10 2010, 07:06:20 UTC

Thanks :)

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longerthanwedo January 29 2011, 00:33:48 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad!