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Unfinished (With Fear in Your Smile) [4/?]

Mar 09, 2010 12:37

Title: Unfinished (With Fear in Your Smile) [4]
Author: longerthanwedo
Beta: melody_so_sweet
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan for now.
Rating: PG-13
POV: 3rd, Brendon centric.
Summary: He’s writing in blood; a feeble attempt to finish the story. The story of his life, of him and him and him. It’s a story of life, of love, of lions and fireworks and years gone by. ( Read more... )

writing: fanfiction, pairing: ryan ross/brendon urie, writing: slash

Comments 24

sixfeetdownpour March 11 2010, 05:55:23 UTC

this is amazing! You're not only a talented artist but writer as well

longerthanwedo March 11 2010, 05:56:59 UTC

Thanks so much! :D

sixfeetdownpour March 11 2010, 15:25:22 UTC

youre welcome. :] you should post your art here too. i do :]

longerthanwedo March 11 2010, 20:31:49 UTC

I do. Either I post it at the end of an icon post that's relevant, or I wait until I have a good collection of new stuff to do a long art post. :)

bookxbutterfly April 19 2010, 07:37:35 UTC

Ryan scowled as Brendon took a third picture. “Give it to me!” he whined, and crowded Brendon, grabbing his shoulder as Brendon held the camera behind his back.

Brendon looked at Ryan’s eyes and thought, why shouldn’t I wonder? Why should I let this be just another chance slipped by?

Ryan caught hold of his arm and yanked the camera up to eye level. Brendon hardly resisted - the sun in Ryan’s eyelashes was enough to weaken his grip - and in this moment, he couldn’t find a reason. He couldn’t find a reason not to, so he leaned in and pressed his mouth to Ryan’s.

Ryan’s hand stopped tugging and his eyes closed and Brendon’s finger came down on the shutter.

Click.

WHAT A WONDERFUL ENDING TO A WONDERFUL CHAPTER!! <3

this was so wonderfully written. you're just wonderful. :3

longerthanwedo April 20 2010, 02:16:49 UTC

Thanks for the wonderful comment <3