Fic: WC, "Self-Portrait, In Skin" (FTM!Neal)

[lonetread]

For lgbtfest (fest post, with detailed header, here). Thanks, flist, couldn't have done it without you. Enjoy.

Comments

[dime_for_12]

Wow. I absolutely adore your writing, and this is just another masterful piece!

It's amazing how you can set up a scene and a mood with just a few words. In places, the fic is saturated with this quiet, distant desperation, and I caught myself reading a bit faster in reponse (my breath even quickened, I was so caught up in it).

Very, very nice work!

[lonetread]

Aw, thanks! I'm so glad you liked it; you leave such wonderful comments. =D

[embroiderama]

I like this a lot. The Lone Gunmen were a particularly awesome choice.

[lonetread]

Thanks! They were a lot of fun -- happy to hear it worked out.

[asimaiyat]

Oh Neal. <3

I like how even though there's so much loneliness in this fic, he still has this community of fellow outlaws who are there for him. Especially Mozzie.

[lonetread]

I know, right? <3

Hee, "community of fellow outlaws", that's it exactly. :) Thanks for the comment!

[photoash]

I really liked your story. I think how you laid it out and the amount of depth to each section despite the economy of words was really impressive.

Thanks for sharing it with everyone!

[lonetread]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

[minkhollow]

(Still lacking a White Collar icon; I should fix that one of these days.)

I loved this! It's an intriguing and entirely believable look at Neal. He's from Ohio! The Lone Gunmen (whom I know just enough about to get the cameo)! AND IS LIZZIE ACTUALLY EL BECAUSE HOW AWESOME WOULD THAT BE? THIS AWESOME. ::holds hands way far apart::

[lonetread]

(Same here. 15 is just so limiting.)

Yay, thanks! And OF COURSE SHE IS. :D What can I say? It seems every fic I write, they end up BFFs.