[fic] an accidental love story (with bonus zombies) Part 3

[lone_wo1f]

An Accidental Love Story (With Bonus Zombies)
Flight of the Conchords | Dave/Murray | R

word count: 23, 478
warnings: the end of the world. m/m relationship.

disclaimer: all fake. the world hasn’t ended.

summary: Dave has spent his entire friendship with the Conchords pretending to be someone he’s not. Everything is going according to plan until

Comments

[anonymous]

LOVE how this turned out. I'll comment more later but you took my suggestions and just nailed them! I'm proud for you!

[lone_wo1f]

Thank you so much! Your suggestions were really helpful :)

[ovestedinterest]

Epic epic.

Just watched shaun of the dead tonight, how funny.

I love how in-character you kept everyone.
You really pulled off something great here.

Excellent story, character development, pace, everything.
With just the right amount of allusions to things like sleep-groping and the paint ball gun to have me lolling between the FEAR!!!!! for their lives.

Dave is so mean to Jemaine through all of it. Somewhat glad you didn't pair Bret/Jemaine at the same time because that would've been (convenient?/expected?)

Great job, man!

[lone_wo1f]

Shaun of the Dead is one of the best zombie movies ever. <3.

I'm not huge on fics where everyone is paired up. It doesn't seem very believable to me, so I'm glad it didn't take away from the story that they weren't.

Thank you so much for your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[stana12]

LOVED this! I keep thinking about it and I feel like I watched part 1 of a movie, lol.

Any chance of a part 2? Though I'm sure you meant for us to just imagine how they'd end up, I'd really love to read how you'd continue on with this. Is Bret infected? How will they survive? Will they run into/team up with anyone else?

You really wrote the Dave and Murray scenes beautifully and I love how they "get" each other. I reallyreally like them together and wish they'd get written more often.

Bravo- and thanks for a great read! :)

[lone_wo1f]

There probably won't be a part two, sorry! It took me so long to just complete this one that I can't even imagine starting a part two but I'm really happy you enjoyed it enough to want one!

I'm a big fan of Murray/Dave, and I agree. They need to get more fic time!

[asylumsatellite]

Phew! I think I held my breath throughout that entire fic...

[lone_wo1f]

yikes! glad you can breathe again now that it's over!

[entwashian]

Loved this! And I agree with the commenter above me.

[lone_wo1f]

thanks so much :)