Comments | lone_poppy: In the Line of Duty

lone_poppy

In the Line of Duty - Part One

Nov 05, 2008 22:14

Title: In the Line of Duty
Author: lone-poppy
Pairing: Brennan/Booth
Rating: PG/T
Spoilers: Reference to 'The Wannabe in the Weeds'
Big THANK YOU: To kateroly for beta'ing this for me.
Summary: I wanted to write something that involved Booth's family, however I have always felt that Booth's parents have passed (the way he tells Bones she should just talk to her ( Read more... )

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lone_poppy November 6 2008, 11:43:57 UTC

Thank you, I should have more up in the weekend.

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lone_poppy November 6 2008, 11:43:21 UTC

Thank you!

harknessgirl November 6 2008, 00:24:25 UTC

This is a very interesting start, everything you have written about is very believable, well done!!
Can't wait for more, thanks for sharing.

lone_poppy November 6 2008, 11:43:00 UTC

Thank you, I hope to have the next part up on the weekend.

deepsorskies November 6 2008, 10:45:42 UTC

Amazing! A very interesting take on why we know so little about Booth's family. I always got the impression, too, that his parents are dead and that something is just ... not right. I love it how you let Booth try to do what Brennan wishes Russ had done: taking care of his little brother. More please!
I also love your suspenseful way of narrating the story. You keep the reader guessing along with the characters. Great work!

lone_poppy November 6 2008, 11:42:29 UTC

Thank you so much for that wonderful comment.

I hope to get the next part up on the weekend, but I have to tell you I am a little nervous with the comments I've gotten that it may not live up.

deepsorskies November 6 2008, 13:58:27 UTC

Don't be nervous! Getting feedback is of course both important and wonderful, and you get to see if your story works for us readers, but, in the end, you have to ignore us and just go with what you think is best for your story ;)
But I get that it's probably harder to write the next part then it was writing the first, because now you have all these little voices in your head demanding something just as good. I, myself, am not as brave as you and have yet to post anything resembling a story ;)

anonymous November 6 2008, 16:29:13 UTC

Whoa. Heavy, and completely within the realm of possibility. I could TOTALLY see this happening; it fits in well with Booth's character.

lone_poppy November 9 2008, 07:54:47 UTC

Thanks