Fic: Surprise? [Smudge/Ronnie, PG-13]

Jul 01, 2007 19:48

Title: Surprise?
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Alan Smith/Cristiano Ronaldo
Summary: Alan surprise for Cristiano doesn't go as planned, really.
Notes: for eternitybreaks / OTP fic exchange who wanted Smudge/Ronnie over PG with a trip to Portugal and old flames. It kinda turned out angsty because I was in a semi-emo mood when I wrote this but I hope you like it!

Surprise? )

fanfiction, cristiano ronaldo, alan smith

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eternitybreaks July 2 2007, 00:15:57 UTC
*sighs*

Why no-one writes these two as much as Wayne/Cristiano is besides me. Thank you for this fic, it was lovely ♥

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londoncallingx3 July 2 2007, 04:15:14 UTC
They do make a very, VERY pretty OTP. I guess it's just because Cris and Wazza are the pretty obvious pairing :D

Glad you like it!

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soliloquy88 July 2 2007, 03:16:36 UTC
aww how sweet.

lovely, angsty story :D

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londoncallingx3 July 2 2007, 04:15:35 UTC
Thanks!

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perfect__denial July 2 2007, 03:32:39 UTC
Alan/Cristiano pwns my soul. Great fic, my dear <3333

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londoncallingx3 July 2 2007, 04:15:54 UTC
Thanks!

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fairylanterns July 2 2007, 03:47:24 UTC
Aw, Ronaldo! :D

You should really write some Yankees fic sometime in the future when you have time. ♥

Also, I have to say that your layout is amazing. Rafa, Andy, Jeter/A-Rod, & Ronaldo all in one header!

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londoncallingx3 July 2 2007, 04:19:17 UTC
I've thought about it from time to time, not so much anymore since Jeter and ARod don't have sleepovers anymore but I dunno :D Maybe I'll give it a go someday.

Thanks! I tried to fit Robbie and Melky in there but they looked awkward! Poor boys D:

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thememoryslides July 2 2007, 08:22:28 UTC
this was gorgeous (so is your header! I spot Andy.) I enjoy these two but I never write them since I dont like writing Alan heh. But this was wonderful Adding to mems.

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londoncallingx3 July 4 2007, 03:05:51 UTC
I've never written Smudge before so it was interesting. Thanks <3

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