Comments | lomonaaeren: Chapter Eight of 'Changing of the Guard'- Yes, Right in the Middle of Diagon Alley

lomonaaeren

Chapter Eight of 'Changing of the Guard'- Yes, Right in the Middle of Diagon Alley

Mar 22, 2008 22:44

humor, harry/draco, changing of the guard, angst, rated r or nc-17, ewe, romance

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maxikari March 23 2008, 05:17:30 UTC

I'm loving this story. Harry and Draco it is ironic that they hate each other in real life but both Harry and Draco like "Brian" better. I can't wait to read more of this.
Love this and well all of your stories ^^

lomonaaeren March 24 2008, 02:19:23 UTC

Thank you!

Harry thinks Brian is not only more likable than he is, but more real.

firedraygon97 March 23 2008, 05:29:09 UTC

I love the quips Harry has for the bigot. Gah, I really hate cowards like that. I wish Harry could've gotten into a deeper argument, but gotta stay in character, huh? Hee, the way Harry and Draco respond to each other's actions in synch is excellent.

lomonaaeren March 24 2008, 02:19:41 UTC

Thank you!

Draco would probably have dragged Harry away if he tried to stay and argue, since the man was one of his customers.

astartes_amazon March 23 2008, 06:57:03 UTC

Heeee! I love the tension. I can not wait until Draco starts linking the clues together *bounces*

lomonaaeren March 24 2008, 02:19:49 UTC

Thank you!

verschreibsel March 23 2008, 10:53:37 UTC

I love it!
More please ^^

lomonaaeren March 24 2008, 02:20:03 UTC

More probably on Tuesday!

ravenqueen55 March 23 2008, 11:31:23 UTC

“After all, she already saw the ugliest thing she possibly could-her father attacking two strangers who had done nothing to him.”

“Ah,” Brian said just as Draco was about to gracefully accept the apology, “but you would have if he didn’t have the power to stop you, wouldn’t you? You’d have flung that stone and rejoiced in it.”

GO BRIAN!!

Loved this chapter.

lomonaaeren March 24 2008, 02:20:20 UTC

Thanks! I had a lot of fun with those lines.