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lomonaaeren

Chapter One of 'An Urn For Her Ashes'- Displacement

Jul 15, 2015 22:43

Title: An Urn For Her Ashes
Disclaimer: J. K. Rowling and associates own these characters. I am writing this story for fun and not profit.
Pairing: Eventual Snarry, Lily/James and past unrequited Severus/Lily
Warnings: Major AU, violence
Rating: R
Summary: AU. When Voldemort inflicted the Horcrux on baby Harry, his mother’s love manifested by ( Read more... )

action/adventure, angst, harry/snape, pov: severus, set at hogwarts, au, rated r or nc-17, chaptered novella, an urn for her ashes, romance

Comments 4

lijahlover July 16 2015, 07:08:01 UTC

This is interesting so far. I like Harry and Snape's conversation.

lomonaaeren July 21 2015, 20:24:16 UTC

Thank you!

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lomonaaeren July 21 2015, 20:25:14 UTC

Thank you!

It is, in a lot of ways. Since Harry hasn't talked to many people besides Dumbledore (and since Severus is pretty much inherently unreasonable on the topic of James), not a lot of people have realized that Harry is literally haunted by Lily's spirit.

calmnla July 23 2015, 17:43:02 UTC

Okay, now I understand the title, and that there needs to be an urn for Lily's ashes other than Harry. There is a real creepy feeling to this! Can't those Lily-memories be removed ala Pensieve memories? I think Dumbledore is the creepiest. I wonder if Harry has any sense of self. I guess Harry wonders that, too! Wait, were her transferred memories only about Severus? Why? Something is odd there.

Severus cannot be pleased that Dumbledore has seen all those memories and never said a thing. I wonder if Dumbledore DID plant any memories.

Is Harry really going to say "thanks for the 17 years, you all enjoy yourselves now"? I wonder if Severus is his first encounter with someone who is not just modeling clay for Dumbledore? Though he kind of is, but fights it.

So much to look forwad to as all is revealed!