Chapter Eleven of 'Burning Day'- The Banned Ritual

[lomonaaeren]

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[helenadax]

Loved Hortensia and her plan! She's a very interesting character. Draco and Harry's plan was great too

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

I think all the characters would be happy to hear their plans praised. :)

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

It is kind of sad, but it's that or live with constant attacks, and so Harry and Draco chose this.

[enchanted_jae]

Oh, those little schemers!

[lomonaaeren]

Sometimes Draco chuckles, thinking about all the tricks they're playing on people.

[anonymous]

I can't forget the sequel/first in the set: Draco is bored and tired of the charade. So that is what I see looming. Be careful what you wish for, yada yada....Not that they started on this path purposefully, though. They are being very clever, and having fun with it. I do wonder about Hortensia - I have not seen a character like her before, though Snape comes the closest what with the dedication to craft. Oh, the way Harry in the "memory" evoked Persephone in himself was brilliant!

[anonymous]

Oops. Calmnla there. Forgot to sign in before commenting. No paperbag over my head, really.

[lomonaaeren]

Draco is bored sometimes, and can foresee that he will be even now, but he's enthusiastic at others. Making people believe this about him does make him feel special and in Harry's confidence.

And thanks!

[gracerene]

So interesting the idea of poisoning will. I'm quite liking Hortensia and her creepiness and love of potions. :D

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you! Hortensia gets even more creepy in the next chapter, although I'm not sure how that's possible.