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calmnla September 27 2013, 15:15:47 UTC
What a lovely ending. I could not have wished for, or imagine, anything more. It surprised me; I expected to be unsatosfied with the End of such a long, powerful saga.

This observation by Severus about the previous Severus is poignant:

"The more he learned, the more he resented what a waste that man’s life had been"

Yes. Best perspective shift ever!!!

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lomonaaeren September 29 2013, 23:55:46 UTC
Thanks!

I didn't think I could end it with the last chapter, although since I first started thinking about this story, it's been 24 chapters in my mind. I think adding an epilogue was one of the best ideas I've ever had.

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lomonaaeren September 29 2013, 23:56:20 UTC
Thank you!

This has been an experience, the chance to write a mentor story that's not complicated as much by Harry and Severus's previous enmity.

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your_hucklebery September 28 2013, 18:53:10 UTC
Wow, Severus is really devoted to Harry. That is nice to see. Being such a HD fan I wish more could of been done for Draco. Loved this story.

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lomonaaeren September 29 2013, 23:56:44 UTC
Thank you!

Harry does think he did all he could. In his mind, Draco's independence and freedom from his father matter more than getting him a new romance.

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