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lomonaaeren April 16 2013, 23:38:32 UTC
Thank you!

No, not totally clueless. Just worried that the romance might distract them.

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anonymous April 14 2013, 14:51:01 UTC
I love this powerfull Harry, it´s very hot to see him much more powerfull than anyone. And Draco would to fell so inferior to him, so he trying to be equal in other ways makes sense. If he has the hunger for power and cunningness of a real slythering, this is the natural consequence, Harry would have to be conquered by him, in some way. But... there was that thing that Pansy said about Draco´s obsession with Potter in another chapter... It is what I think it is, or just old competition that Draco wants to forget? If it´s competition, he seems to be bringing it back from the past...This is one of you best stories, please write more to us!^^
Dianne Potter

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lomonaaeren April 16 2013, 23:39:20 UTC
Thank you!

Well, Draco hasn't thought much about the obsession; it's something Pansy sees. She could be right, or she could be misinterpreting Draco's behavior. Draco relies on his friends to tell him certain things, but he doesn't let them have the final word on everything either.

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anonymous April 14 2013, 15:08:50 UTC
Oh, and I forgot to say, some dialogs are marvelous, they make me laugh so hard! Like this one ( ... )

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lomonaaeren April 16 2013, 23:40:04 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad that you like the dialogue. That's my main attempt to add humor to this story, since not everything that's happening is funny.

Not inspired directly by that scene, no, but I do think of Hermione as someone who comes in and usually tries to clear the table for her own preoccupations.

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janey_p April 14 2013, 15:39:56 UTC
Good that Harry caught on, but amusing that he never expected it in the first place. Has there ever been a more innocent Dark Lord? :D

Also good that they are pretty honest to each other there. Of course their advisers would have had coronaries, but for their relationship as such it's best. :)

Loved the chapter. :)

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lomonaaeren April 16 2013, 23:41:00 UTC
Well, he really didn't expect Malfoy to be attracted to him, no. More like, he thought certain people would use romance as an excuse to get close to him and manipulate him, and he didn't think Malfoy needed to do that when he was the one who proposed the alliance to Harry in the first place.

Briseis is actually interested in the paths it opens. Rosenthal will be closer to the coronary.

Thank you!

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callistianstar April 14 2013, 18:28:55 UTC
Had to giggle incessantly when Harry's plan to kiss Draco back, backfired. lol. I loved the description of how the flowers and the magic Harry used in front of Draco and Skeeter. This chapter was super fun to read. :D Awesome job.

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lomonaaeren April 16 2013, 23:41:17 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it.

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