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ldydark1 November 26 2012, 23:44:42 UTC
I guess it does make sense. Harry is bracing himself,
and telling Draco, that things may change between them once
they leave the house and part ways. It was very revealing of
Draco to open up to Harry about himself and feelings.
I also think it is interesting that Harry is wondering if this
"Thing" that is going on between he and Draco is "Real."
I like the emotions going on here, and the descriptions of
everything. I <3 hurt / comfort and this is my cup of tea.

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lomonaaeren November 27 2012, 21:59:17 UTC
Yes. He doesn't want Draco to laugh at him, and he doesn't necessarily want to stay with him, either, if this isn't real or lasting.

Thank you! Draco felt he had nothing to lose, but I do think it was also brave.

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ldydark1 November 27 2012, 23:05:12 UTC
You are right, that is very true, it was
very Brave for Draco to open up and
reveal to Harry what his thoughts and
feelings were.

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helenadax November 27 2012, 00:05:22 UTC
Nice chapter! Both of them feel insecure about what will happen when they get out of the house, but they shouldn't.

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lomonaaeren November 27 2012, 21:59:39 UTC
Thank you!

Harry would probably ask, "Why not?" There's no indication, for him, that Draco would necessarily stick around.

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tinyscribbles80 November 27 2012, 00:46:15 UTC
getting to read this first thing in the morning while I eat breakfast is freaking AWESOME!!!

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lomonaaeren November 27 2012, 21:59:48 UTC
Good!

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lijahlover November 27 2012, 04:46:33 UTC
A brilliant update, I liked their conversation they had together.

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lomonaaeren November 27 2012, 21:59:57 UTC
Thank you!

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callistianstar November 29 2012, 02:01:44 UTC
I see that Harry can call Draco "Malfoy" when he's talking about him, like with the Patronus, which is good since Hermione would be pretty concerned if she heard "Draco." Still these constrictions are terrible. I'm glad Harry's being realistic, and hope to see less conflicted thoughts for him soon.

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