Chapter One of 'Leopardspaw'- Remains of an Artifact

[lomonaaeren]

Title: Leopardspaw
Disclaimer: J. K. Rowling and associates own these characters. I am writing this story for fun and not profit.
Pairing: Eventual Harry/Draco, past Lucius/Narcissa
Rating: R
Warnings: Violence, some angst
Summary: The Ministry is very sorry that its latest mistake-an artifact that was supposed to let Aurors detect lies-blew up on

Comments

[helenadax]

Oh, so even the "dear" in the letter that Draco sent to Harry is true, isn't it? Cool ^^

I loved this first chapter, very funny. I think that inventing a spell which could make anyone to compose poetic rhapsodies to owls would be awesome, Harry should talk to Ron and George XD

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

It is! Though that might only be because Draco thought it would get him a better hearing.

Harry isn't inclined to get anywhere near them most of the time, but he might send the idea in a letter. :)

[lorena_98]

Excited for this story! Cant wait to see when they meet up. Thanks!

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you! I appreciate the comment.

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

Harry is pouty about how boring his life is. It's not like he could help it.

[albichorizon]

I really like this premise and I'm looking forward to reading more.

I loved the bit where Harry wished he could see lies in colors other than red.

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

[groolover]

What a great idea! You come up with all the best ones. I look forward to seeing how this one plays out.

[lomonaaeren]

Thanks! I'm not sure of the ultimate end of the story myself yet, but I'm excited to find out how and where it goes.