AHhhh! This is brilliant! Your descriptions are absolutely beautiful and transport us right into the pages of your story. It was like I could feel the sea spray, float on the breeze as I basked in Draco's delight in his newfound 'fishing' talent, and feel the rhythm of the mummid's dance. So much love!
The little interim where certain long-held insecurities, or bands of pain around Draco's heart, finally loosened was so touching. Just...truly emotionally satisfying.
And of course, that curveball ending! *Bounces up and down in glee*
Draco has other things to think about at the moment, but yes, that lack of pain is going to help him in the future, especially with encouraging him to trust Harry.
Uh oh... at least one of them is getting ideas... I sense trouble ahead. :D Though I would say they should make sure that that's not just the mummid way of producing offspring. ;)
And once again I'm left a little overwhelmed with the mummid units. All those combinations... The larger the group, the more potential individuals... how the hell do they keep track? *faints a little* You've come up with quite the concept here. ^^
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The little interim where certain long-held insecurities, or bands of pain around Draco's heart, finally loosened was so touching. Just...truly emotionally satisfying.
And of course, that curveball ending! *Bounces up and down in glee*
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Draco has other things to think about at the moment, but yes, that lack of pain is going to help him in the future, especially with encouraging him to trust Harry.
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Though I would say they should make sure that that's not just the mummid way of producing offspring. ;)
And once again I'm left a little overwhelmed with the mummid units. All those combinations... The larger the group, the more potential individuals... how the hell do they keep track? *faints a little*
You've come up with quite the concept here. ^^
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