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ldydark1 August 7 2012, 18:02:08 UTC
I am really enjoying how this H/D fiction is unfolding.
I like how open and sweet Harry is to Draco.
I like Dracos maturity, esp. with handling the portrait.
If I were Draco, I would tell Harry about the portrait,
how he handled it, and then that night I would turn the
portrait around to face the wall. I like how Draco is
allowing Harry into his thoughts and life, thinking about
him more and more as an equal. For Draco to invest
that much time and effort and creativity to deduce what
was wrong with Harrys knee, and make the effort to
make a potion for Harry, well, lets say, I think Draco
has fallen for Harry the way that Harry has fallen for
Draco.....

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lomonaaeren August 15 2012, 20:18:42 UTC
Thank you!

He did tell Harry the portrait insulted him and attacked him, although that conversation wasn't mentioned in Chapter 28. And he told Harry that he turned the portrait to face the wall.

Draco has a different way of doing it than Harry does, but I think you may be right.

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star_faerie August 7 2012, 21:08:12 UTC
Great chapter :) I really enjoyed reading it.

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lomonaaeren August 15 2012, 20:18:48 UTC
Thank you!

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lijahlover August 8 2012, 19:55:19 UTC
I enjoyed this chapter and the ease H/D feel for each other. I liked Harry sneaking smiles to Draco without Hermione catching him.

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lomonaaeren August 15 2012, 20:19:05 UTC
Thanks!

Hermione saw a lot more of them than Harry thought, but she's smart enough to let it go for now.

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lizzy384 August 9 2012, 15:30:15 UTC
I really liked Draco's chat with the portrait of Phineas Nigellus - quite amusing. But then, curious at the same time - I wondered, like Draco, at Phineas' contrary statements about Harry and blood-purity. Was he just trying to ingratiate himself with Draco? Or was he trying to 'spy' or find out Draco's real intentions, or a test? Or is he just mad?! Arh! Still, I was very happy to see Draco passing the 'test ( ... )

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lomonaaeren August 15 2012, 20:21:37 UTC
Thank you!

Phineas was feeling out Draco with those comments, to see how pure-blood he still considered himself. But he's also bored and will cause trouble if he can.

It's the Headmaster of Hogwarts. Since he has a portrait in the Black house, I think he could easily have seen Narcissa there when she was a girl.

Hermione has decided to roll her eyes and let it go for now, although part of her also wonders if that's wise.

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callistianstar August 11 2012, 21:38:56 UTC
I like how Draco made the distinction that Hermine may see the secret smiles, but because she can tell Harry is trying to keep them private or because she doesn't want to accept them, she doesn't bring them up and question them. Great chapter. Looking forward to how all this pans out.

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lomonaaeren August 15 2012, 20:21:56 UTC
Thank you!

Draco will get to hear Hermione's opinion of those smiles sooner than he thinks.

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