Chapter Eighteen of 'The Descent of Magic'- Permission and Pardon

[lomonaaeren]

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[dairygirl]

Wow! Just wow!

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you. Glad you liked it.

[ldydark1]

This is my favorite chapter so far. It is so great of Draco
to take the time and effort to help Harry. And, to begin
to care for him even more. Harry thinking, "I want him,"
was cute and intense. This is very intricate and devious
spellwork. I have never read anything like this in the fictions
of H/D I have read so far. Heal him Draco, Heal him!
Great chapter!

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

Draco tells himself over and over it's just because he wants his ally fit to fight, but Harry chooses to think of it a different way. Let's hope that Draco can match Harry's emotional development so that neither of them is disappointed.

[ldydark1]

I hope draco catches up with Harrys emotions then.

[lijahlover]

Awwwwwww the I trust you made me melt into goo.

[lomonaaeren]

Thanks. It made me smile while I was writing the chapter.

[anonymous]

Beautifully written. I have to agree that "I trust you" was an inspired line.
I sure hope they find out who did this.
C Dumbledore

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you.

The mystery plot would distract too much from the overarching plot, I think. Coping with what was done to him is more important to Harry, and now he has found someone who can help him deal with it better.

[bonfoi]

Powerful thing, trust. Wow!

One thing: Potter firmed his legs around his leg as he extended it. “Yes.” Did you mean hands or fingers?

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you.

Thanks for catching that typo. I meant hands.

[bonfoi]

Psst! Your link "Chapter Nineteen" at the top leads back to "Chapter Seventeen". I think you were happy to post this, eh?

Enjoy your summer and thank you for brightening mine.