Comments | lomonaaeren: Chapter Thirteen of 'Business Meetings'- Blue Moon

lomonaaeren

Chapter Thirteen of 'Business Meetings'- Blue Moon

Nov 23, 2011 12:35

angst, creature!fic, business meetings, drama, auror!fic, politics, romance, dual pov: draco and harry

Comments 27

mezzo_cammin November 23 2011, 18:04:48 UTC

I adore Draco's point of view, here. How badly he wants, how much he feels, and how hard it is for him to restrain himself. Each swallow of Harry's blood was so beautifully written, so well realized. *happy shivers*

I can't wait for Sunday, although I hate to see this story come to an end in the next week or so.

lomonaaeren November 28 2011, 01:15:29 UTC

Thank you!

Yes, unfortunately, all good things must come to an end. I do have an idea for what will be (eventually, I want to finish a few one-shots and chapters first) be replacing it.

goddess47 November 23 2011, 18:08:56 UTC

Oooooohhhhhhh......

I cannot tell you how much I adore this fic... It is sheer poetry!

I will be sorry when it is done... Too soon!

lomonaaeren November 28 2011, 01:15:45 UTC

Thank you!

Believe me, I fully share the feelings of being sorry.

piratesmile331 November 23 2011, 18:22:03 UTC

Their relationship is so very passionate, even though they've barely touched one another. Your writing is gorgeous!

lomonaaeren November 28 2011, 01:15:52 UTC

Thank you!

anubiswolfe November 23 2011, 18:47:05 UTC

Only you could make blood drinking such a fucking hot experience like that. Oh my god. That was almost as good as sex scenes. Almost.

Only about two chapters left?! I can't believe it! This story is just so...amazing. I will be so sad to see the ending. But hey! We're not there just yet, so, I cannot wait until next chapter. Seriously.

lomonaaeren November 28 2011, 01:16:30 UTC

Thank you! I promise a sex scene (well, one dependent on more than blood) in the next chapter.

Yes, I've decided it'll be 15. There's just not much reason to stretch it out further, considering what happened in Chapter 14.

star_faerie November 23 2011, 21:40:21 UTC

Brilliant chapter. This chapter really made me think of the poem 'Stolen Child'. In part, I think, because Draco is trying (succeeding really) to lure Harry away and because I think vamp!Draco seems very alien and seductive. I'm looking forward to seeing how the cards are going to fall in regards to the Ministry.

lomonaaeren November 28 2011, 01:17:10 UTC

Thanks!

That's not a reference that occurred to me, but I love that poem and for a long time wrote things heavily influenced by the idea of faeries luring someone away. Thanks for giving me something to think about.