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lomonaaeren

Chapter Forty-Seven of 'The Marriage of True Minds'- Within the Ring

Jul 24, 2011 12:01

harry/draco, draco/astoria, the marriage of true minds, rated r or nc-17, romance, dual pov: draco and harry, novel-length, angst, wizarding traditions, lucius/narcissa, drama, auror!fic, harry/ginny, harry/other, ewe, ron/hermione

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helenadax July 24 2011, 16:22:48 UTC

Oh, that was amazing! I'm so glad the beast is gone!! Harry's awesome, I loved the way he confronted his fears with Draco's help.

The last bit about the ring was very cute and romantic.

serari_chan July 24 2011, 17:04:59 UTC

OH.
My.
GOD.

Hitting the refresh button over and over DOES yield results. And the results from this particular installment were spectacular.

The way Draco found a way to support Harry was astounding (nevermind Hermione getting to do a repeat of third year). 'I can't let you die." Wow, but what a way to tap into the forgotten bigger fear of Harry's, or rather the seemingly lesser because of the more immediate threat of the beast: Harry's fear of others being hurt on his behalf.

And Mom-power made for a massive win:

"...or Narcissa with her expression of brilliance and steadiness becoming uncertainty, and that was worse."

"Dear one. I love you so much. I’m doing this for you."

If Draco didn't know before now, there's no way he could miss it at this point, being inside Harry's mind such as he was.

The new layer of the rings... I can't wait to learn the significance!

otakuangel July 24 2011, 17:17:37 UTC

So. Freaking. GOOD.

groolover July 24 2011, 17:38:15 UTC

What a brilliant chapter! The description of the ritual was so vivid that I almost felt as if I was there.

ma_chelle July 24 2011, 17:39:52 UTC

This chapter was absolutely brilliant!

Draco & Harry have such a strong connection and love each other so deeply. ♥ They have so clearly chosen each other, I'm wondering if Draco's actions also helped to form the cobalt.

The intensity of this chapter and the strong emotions are the reasons I love your writing. When Draco said he couldn't let Harry die and Harry said how much he loved him, and he was doing this for him, I could feel those emotions. Can't wait for more!! :)