Comments | lomonaaeren: Chapter Forty-Two of 'The Marriage of True Minds'- Forwards Into the Circles of the World

lomonaaeren

Chapter Forty-Two of 'The Marriage of True Minds'- Forwards Into the Circles of the World

Jul 09, 2011 12:27

harry/draco, draco/astoria, the marriage of true minds, rated r or nc-17, romance, dual pov: draco and harry, novel-length, angst, wizarding traditions, lucius/narcissa, drama, auror!fic, harry/ginny, harry/other, ewe, ron/hermione

Comments 23

ma_chelle July 9 2011, 17:56:16 UTC

Beautiful chapter! Quite possibly my favorite so far. :) Not only does this story get better and better, it continues to exceed my expectations for the characters since the story began--the slow pacing has really made it feel believable. They have both come so far, and to see them truly falling in love is just a joy to read. My heart soared when Harry actually proposed, and again when he reassured Draco is was not just to appease the bond. And Draco saying I love you first...that moment between them was just perfect! <3

lomonaaeren July 9 2011, 17:57:10 UTC

Thank you. I hoped for a balance like that, but wasn't sure that I would actually achieve it. I'm glad that it sounded believable Harry proposed, though; I wanted to spare Draco from doing all the work.

ashcake0405 July 9 2011, 18:19:20 UTC

AHHHHHH!!!!! I don't think this could get any more perfect! And Draco was the first to say I love you! How perfect! And Harry wants to marry him for real. Oh my gosh this is amazing! I think I'm going to read this chapter all over again. I can't wait for the wedding, and Draco and Harry meeting Laura to see Harry's jealousy at least one more time. lol

cyn_ful July 9 2011, 18:20:26 UTC

*cries* I love Narcissa. I love how she goes all Black on Draco and Harry, making Draco the "girl." hahaha Although, it did bring questions into my head if Harry could do something about the line of Blacks. He became head of it when Sirius died, correct? Is there some way in which to pull the protection of the Blacks in even more than what Narcissa just did? She welcomed Harry as son-in-law into her own house, that he is the head of.

They love each other!!! I love that. *sigh* *goo*

piratesmile331 July 9 2011, 18:49:48 UTC

This was absolutely beautiful. I'm so happy that Harry really WANTS to marry Draco now. I love Narcissa, and that Harry has accepted what she has been offering him all along. I felt sorry for Ian, but I think he'll be okay. I'm glad that Harry met with him in person, and that Draco was (barely) able to keep himself in check. I look forward to their meeting with Laura.
Oh, and YAY! for insatiable!Draco!

anubiswolfe July 9 2011, 19:10:31 UTC

OH OH! This was amazing! I can't decide if this or chapter forty is my favorite so far, haha!

-snort- I actually kinda liked what Ian did there. If that's the last time we'll see his character, at least he went out grinning I guess, haha.

Jealous!Draco and soon-to-be Jealous!Harry if Draco's plan(s) go right never get old, always so amusing. ;)

EEEEEK! I was hoping against hope for that 'I love you,' to come from one of them before the story ended, but both was just splendid! AND it's not even the end! Score! (:

LOVELY, LOVELY, LOVELY!