[one-shots]: Labyrinth You There, H/D, R

[lomonaaeren]

Title: Labyrinth You There
Disclaimer: J. K. Rowling and associates own these characters. I am writing this story for fun and not profit.
Pairings: Harry/Draco (Harry/Ginny mentioned)
Rating: R
Warnings: Sex, surrealism, weird POV.
Wordcount: 5300
Summary: In which there is a labyrinth, a hero, and a way through. And a creature waiting at the

Comments

[nightshadow_t2]

Lovely, lovely story. I love the weavings of the mythology and the semi-sentience of the labyrinth. Ever thought of a Labyrinth crossover?

[animeserena]

Seconded :)

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

I've never seen the movie Labyrinth, so no.

[serari_chan]

Oh my.

That was WONDERFUL.

Malfoy fantasy made reality by Harry.

This was a different kind of Awesome, like that of 'God in the Blood' (for which I tried to leave a comment for, but when I tried to post, IE crapped out on me, only posting two lines of my comment. It was 4am and I was done.).

Everyone trying to get into the Manor, but not because they truly care. Harry in there, because while he waited too long, almost to the point of being negligent, he still cared. The walls holding Draco's dreams and fears was interesting, seeing as how it was a combination of the Labryinth spell and Draco's mind that determined what would happen to those who entered the Manor. Because of his past experience with Aurors, is that why they were gored? And why Harry was allowed to pass- that lack of hate and fear, which was reserved for the Aurors?

This was fantastic...brain brekkie. On to tummy food now.....

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

Harry would say that it's what you do, not how long you wait to do it. :)

The maze wasn't entirely under Draco's control. It defended him and gave him input as well as took it, but it mostly took care of the Aurors and the other people because they would have threatened Draco.

A lot of it did have to do with Harry's potential for compassion, though.

[lilyoftheval5]

My first reaction?
Beecha wawa!

[lomonaaeren]

I don't think I get the reference?

[lilyoftheval5]

I couldn't recall either. I had to google it to be sure.
It's from cartoon Ewoks that I watched in my pre-teen years and means something between 'Oh my goodness' and 'Wow.

Weird what things stay in one's long-term memories...

[helenadax]

Beautiful! I loved the mythology.

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

[hogwartshoney]

Man, this was lyrical - almost like a dance. Really, I almost felt myself weaving back and forth with the words.

Really hugely enjoyable read. I love what you do with words, I mean Pleasure ate him, sweet as roses. <-- who *writes* like that? Oh, yeah. You do ;)

MOAR !

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

I don't know exactly when I'll write something fairy-tale like this again, but more is always coming. :)