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groolover May 13 2010, 00:18:06 UTC
I really love the ending of this. (And the rest, too! But the ending is perfect.)

One small point: I think you mean Madam Pince, not Prince.

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lomonaaeren May 14 2010, 00:41:48 UTC
Thank you!

Thanks for catching that typo. It's hard when the misspelled word is also a word itself.

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groolover May 14 2010, 01:16:13 UTC
Words are tricksy like that :-)

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dark_wing21 May 13 2010, 01:34:04 UTC
Ha~ah...
It's just keep getting better and better. I really like Ventus' irrelevant comments, so funny in a weird way (^^)

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lomonaaeren May 14 2010, 00:42:13 UTC
Thank you! Ventus is comic relief here, and elsewhere in the story, just because her priorities are so different from anyone else's.

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anonymous May 13 2010, 02:04:03 UTC
Ventus provided quite an odd bit of lightness in this otherwise serious chapter. Was kind of funny to see her out of her element.

Unicorn ghosts are a bit creepy, on the whole. And Hermione still annoys me, a lot. Oh well. I think she's destined to.

Can't wait for the next update.
-Jolene

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lomonaaeren May 14 2010, 00:42:40 UTC
Thank you!

It may be the nature of unicorn ghosts to be creepy, just as it's Hermione's nature to be annoying. :)

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daftfear May 13 2010, 02:59:56 UTC
I reaaaaaaaally hope that the "other theorists" are wrong. :S

*flails* The enormity of all this hasn't even sunk in yet for me, I can't imagine how heavy it must be for Harry and Draco. Amazing chapter, here. I'm especially glad that Draco is determined not to let Harry go it alone. Harry REALLY needs to stop doing that, haha.

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lomonaaeren May 14 2010, 00:42:57 UTC
We can hope!

Thanks. It may be slightly easier for Harry, since he was expected to save the world once before.

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marionquixote May 13 2010, 18:52:45 UTC
This...this...
This.

I think you should try to re-write this out of HP fandom and publish it so I can buy it and read it and re-read it until the binding wears out so I have to buy a new copy.

Every chapter gets better and better. I think this is my favorite fic of yours so far, and it's not even close to being finished.

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lomonaaeren May 14 2010, 00:43:24 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you like it. Writing a story this long means there's always the chance for it to become confused and wander away from the track.

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