Part Eight of 'The Long-Desired'

[lomonaaeren]

Comments

[piratesmile331]

I've been lurking here reading for weeks, and I just have to tell you that I love this story. I'm sorry I haven't commented sooner. I'm pretty sure I read at least parts of the first two series, and now I'm going to go back and read the whole thing over again. I love your complicated magic, and you are so wonderful at expressing their (especially Harry's) mixed and complex emotions.

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you, and it's no problem. I would be interested to see if your perspective changes after you read the whole of the series; I think there are buildups in the rest of the stories that you need to see to appreciate.

[dm999]

Great chapter.

I specially like the last line. It's so true for Harry.

See ya

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

[mellyna]

Wonderful chapter. Looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing.

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!

[allycat_aria]

I think Harry will be able to quit his job without too many questions since he was already missing quite a bit of work. I do wonder how Ron will react, but maybe he'll accept it once he sees how much better Harry is doing.

Seeing as there are 5 chapters left, I'm wondering what other twists you'll put in, whether it be other vampires or vampire hunters.

All in all, this was a very sweet chapter. I like this attentive and obsessed Draco.

[lomonaaeren]

Yes. The main conflict will be with Ron, rather than with the Aurors, since they have been kind of hoping that Harry would quit and stop obsessing about vampires and being a public embarrassment to the Ministry.

And thank you!

[yanagi_wa]

It seems that Harry's finally gotten his brain back on the right track. I do love it that Draco's so possessive. Great chapter.

[lomonaaeren]

Thank you!